Every time i write is starts out ok but eventually it turns into shitty hip-hop tier lyrics.
for example, i tried writing a poem about how nobody shares my hobby of listening to music, but the last two lines where
>I'm the beta, you're the alpha and omega
>If this was pulp fiction, i'd be Brett and you'd be Jules Winnefield and Vincent Vega
What should i do? Should I read more books? Start sharing my poems on lit? Become a soundcloud rapper? Help me /lit/
>>9383979
>Start sharing my poems on lit?
please no
Idk about english. But if you speak french you should start reading works written in alexandrines.
you must stay in the zone where you are not aware that you are in the zone
Post your shit, it's hard to determine the problem from just two meme lines
>>9384221
i scrapped it and i don't remember any of it