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>>9370386
Remember me
Finally and all my uphill clawing
My dear but if I make
The pearly gates
Do my best to make a drawing
Of god and lucifwr
A boy and girl
An angel kissing on a sinner

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High school sucked for me too. It doesn't get better f.am

>>9370458
nah, sure it do
>out of high school
>college way better

listen to that mountain goats song, "You Were Cool"

>>9370386
Wow I was drunk as fuck last night. Was gonna say this is shit then I realized I wrote it hahahaha

There's a fucking critique thread, go post your shitty junior high poetry there instead of making a new thread.

What do you think Mira's boyfriend feels like dating her?