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In faith of you, my image remains true
Despite the idolatry that sways man,
And when heaven does break, the sky of blue
Shows the fairest of faces you began
While the climb of your eye sits aside twelve
And the clouds sit based, at your feet of gold,
You provide the steps; the heart does dare delve
To hope, yet memory reminds of old:
And tender hearts are scarred by lovely lips
And time’s stain cut deep into memory;
Do starry nights share hope or fall amiss
At the thought of sweet love’s truest beauty?
And if the pious do fall from graces,
Let verse free him, to gaze at heaven’s faces.


Thoughts on this?

>>9360468
did you make it with a autocreate poem technology? ;.), thoughts? Heaven is beautiful!!

>>9360481
but is it a good poem? lol what am i kidding dw soz for posting lol

>>9360492
type well

I am eternal.
Grapes where you lay, among crocs,
Saint haiku poster

>>9360496
wut