I wrote some literature about my trip to new york.

>I wrote

End the sentence there.

>>9336295
>Doesn't even capitalize New York
And that's why I stopped reading 2 sentences in.

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>>9336554
Everything else is well written though

>>9336559
>Father-son
man, just reading this makes me spiteful as fuck. I shall stop there. 10/10 will triggr'd again
>No functional father relationship since he cheated on my mom and took custody of my sister

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>>9336295
blog/10

fuck off

>>9336295
>looked pretty awesome
lol

>>9336295
>So it's been a while since I've written anything.

Fuck i hate this shit

nobody gives a fuck if you have or havent. it is irrelevant

stop it

also your writing is 14 year old tier

>>9337519
THIS

I want to read about your experiences, not about you writing about your experiences.

>It's commercialism at it's pinnacle.
Sounds like an edgy teenager who simultaneously detests capitalism and doesn't know how to spell possessive pronouns.

>>9337539
>>9337519
It's my post, that's what I want to say. Stop being a controlling bitch. Can't control your own life so you have to try to control others, because you just can't stand being reminded of your own insecurities?