Hey I've been interested in poetry fror a bit now and I

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2017-03-26 07:03:41 Post No. 9295689
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Anonymous 2017-03-26 07:03:41 Post No. 9295689 [Report]

Hey I've been interested in poetry fror a bit now and I thought I would try my hand at it.
any criticism welcom

Anonymous 2017-03-26 07:14:05 Post No.9295751
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Anonymous 2017-03-26 07:14:05 Post No.9295751 [Report]

>>9295689
Kys bro porty is dead

Anonymous 2017-03-26 08:54:29 Post No.9296220
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Anonymous 2017-03-26 08:54:29 Post No.9296220 [Report]

>>9295689
Re-work the bit about the monster in the child's room, it's jarring, particularly the word 'their', also try gendering the child (he/she rather than it).

Anonymous 2017-03-26 10:07:04 Post No.9296532
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Anonymous 2017-03-26 10:07:04 Post No.9296532 [Report]

i love your opening line and i feel it could start a darker verse! overall i like it, keep it up!

Anonymous 2017-03-26 10:10:18 Post No.9296550
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Anonymous 2017-03-26 10:10:18 Post No.9296550 [Report]

>>9295689
is this about depression or sadness cuz thats the vibe im getting
either way its kinda meh desu
it doesnt really provoke any action from my point of view

Hey I've been interested in poetry fror a bit now and I

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