How do I write better smut?

>>9256616
Just include more Scat and Gore. Women love that stuff.

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>>9256616
Learn from the master

>>9256616
>Actually have sex first
>Shit inside them
You're welcome

in alliterative prose
https://warosu.org/lit/thread/S6445552#p6448477

always use different creative terms for things

like its never just a "dick"
its a "meat pole" or a "kielbasa sausage"
you get the idea

>>9256727
don't do this, please

read bataille, anais nin and the right bits of michel houellebecq if you want to see a well-written sex scene

1/ read the tao te ching
2/ compare all available translations
3/ ????
4/ profit

>>9256955
>anais nin


seconded

Remember, actual descriptions of sex are almost always unsexy. Don't ever actually describe sex, at least not until you're convinced you've mastered the art. Use hints, allusions, and innuendo.