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Blogger 2017-03-13 02:10:44 Post No. 9230349
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Blogger Blog en español 2017-03-13 02:10:44 Post No. 9230349 [Report]
I invite you to visit my blog, is in spanish but there's the option to translate.

Les invito a visitar mi blog, esta en español y tiene opción para ser traducido.

http://losescritosdegiji.blogspot.mx/
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Anonymous 2017-03-13 05:11:35 Post No.9230976
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Anonymous 2017-03-13 05:11:35 Post No.9230976 [Report]
Nada de talento discernible
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Anonymous 2017-03-13 05:33:45 Post No.9231031
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Anonymous 2017-03-13 05:33:45 Post No.9231031 [Report]
Leí "gotcha zombie" y no creo que esté mal, las descripciones y la atmósfera que provocas es bastante buena, pero creo que no desarrollaste bien el plot twist del final.

Deberías haber presentado a la niña al principio y revelado que estaba muerta al final.

También intenta hacer oraciones más cortas, aveces las alargas demasiado(esa es mi opinión, quizá ese es tú estilo)

Por último, creo que deberías leer todo lo que escribís 2 o 3 semanas después de haberlo escrito, me dió la sensación de que escribiste todo en una sola sesión, sin planear nada.
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gustavfernz.blogspot.com 2017-03-13 05:36:27 Post No.9231037
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gustavfernz.blogspot.com 2017-03-13 05:36:27 Post No.9231037 [Report]
mine is this www.gustavfernz.blogspot.com my poems, i make poems everyday
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