Hope you guys dont mind, I took a lot of the ideas in the earlier thread to quickly write a 6 page essay on The Pipe Strip.
Im gonna hand it into my professor under my friend's name I think.
Tell me what you think, friends. I'm a STEMfag, so i'm not good at writing, but I did my best. Suggestions welcome.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kE6sL5ptUEofa9y43k3bs-taTQdHuxwDFx1ngFyDBU4/edit?usp=drivesdk
Im still reading, but have enjoyed what i've read so far, you've got a nice voice.
where you make the connection to Joseph Stalin and allude to the effects of "unbound and unchecked free thought" I was not convinced. I'm no expert on Stalin or really the evolution of communist philosophies for that matter but it feels that all this bad stuff is the inevitable consequence of abuse of certain ideologies. the point is you could either reinvent your conclusion or do a better job building up to it.
>but there are further layers
>mfw
>>9229947
just curious op but what viral marketing firm do u work for? i'm going to need to hire one when i bring my app to market, and your work is more tasteful than most forced meme marketing