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Mars Volta-like Poetry

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Is there good Mars Volta-like poetry?

Basically poetry with an overuse of vocabulary, pretentious-y, biblical-y, and lots of powerful visual descriptions. Stuff that "sounds cool" but kind-of adds up to nonsense--goofy--but it gets my creativity going (flipping through "Deloused At the Comatorium's Storybook" currently).

Example of beautiful melodramatic goofy nonsense I'm looking for:

"They had been defected and excommunicated
And all the pulses were subverted
And they made sure the obituaries
Showed pictures of smoke stacks
Dancing on the corpses' ashes
A vivid dissection that mocked
The strut of vivisection
Semiautomatic colonies
And a silencing that still walks the streets"
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that's at the drive in, though roulette dares is one of my favorite song lyrics by them
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>>9082142
When you said overuse of vocabulary, pretentiousy, biblicaly I thought of Eliot. It's not melodramatic nor goofy tho.
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Shakespeare?
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>>9082163
Totally is At the Drive In but that track blends in with The Mars Volta catalog. Lyrics were penned by the same gent too.
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Here's the Deloused at the Comatorium storybook for anyone brave enough to read a 23 page assault on comprehensibility.

https://xivilization.net/~marek/binaries/DeLoused_storybook.pdf

Filling in the (many) gaps gives me new ideas.
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>>9082209
I find a lot of fun imagining how Cedric actually wrote this absurdity.

My guess is that he wrote only while on mushrooms or weed and kept the following materials nearby: a thesaurus, a Latin-to-English dictionary, a holy bible, a copy of the Odyssey, and a rotating pick from Lovecraft (only for grotesque themes).

I'm interested in learning tarot cards to call forth similarly absurd/biblical nonsense for ideas.
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>>9082253
http://www.textfixer.com/tools/random-words.php
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>>9082261
Nah that doesn't work. You can't sample from a pool like that. It has to come from some place where superstition, numerology, or other creepy folklore stuff.
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>>9082142
Try some Hart Crane

>And yet this great wink of eternity
>Of rimless floods, unfettered leewardings
>Samite sheeted and processioned where
>Her undinal vast belly moonward bends
>Laughing the wrapt inflections of our love

>Take this Sea, whose diapasen knells
>On scrolls of silver snowy sentences
>The sceptered terror of whose sessions rends
>As her demeanors motion well or ill
>All but the pieties of lovers' hands

>And onwards as bells off San Salvador
>Salute the crocus lustres of the stars
>And these poinsettia meadows of her tides
>Adagios of islands - O my Prodigal
>Complete the dark confessions her veins spell

>Mark how her turning shoulders wind the hours
>And hasten while her penniless rich palms
>Pass superscription of bent foam and wave
>Hasten while they are true - sleep, death desire
>Close round one instant in one floating flour

>Bind us in time O seasons clear and awe
>O minstrel galleons of Carib fire
>Bequeath us to no earthly shore until
>Is answered in the vortex of our grave
>The seal's wide spindrift gaze toward paradise
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>>9082381
Wow this is so radical. Thank you Anon!

I only have pictures of pretty women to offer in exchange as tribute. Please understand.
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