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A subject goes here Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:18:38 Post No. 8851363 [Report]

I was testing some literary devices tonight.
This is apart of a (very) short story I'm writing as practice.

Slowly… white… the absence of color, it takes over. No! The colors of his mind run, run? Colors can’t run! They are being washed, no wiped, no erased, NO!!! They are simply dying, yes, YES! The DEATH of the colors, the DEATH of his mind, the DEATH of his world. I mean, he is dying after all. Dreams crumble, casually, death comes, carefully holding hope, happily hopping, despair corrupts, deforming consciousness, (in a happy voice) "goodbye world" :) …

So what do you think?

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:23:13 Post No.8851376
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:23:13 Post No.8851376 [Report]

I think it is truly wonderful.

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:24:39 Post No.8851382
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:24:39 Post No.8851382 [Report]

>>8851363
>I've just discovered Surrealism: The Post

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:25:12 Post No.8851384
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:25:12 Post No.8851384 [Report]

>reads Beckett once

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:31:17 Post No.8851410
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:31:17 Post No.8851410 [Report]

>>8851384
Samuel?

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:38:46 Post No.8851445
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:38:46 Post No.8851445 [Report]

>>8851410
ye

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:41:54 Post No.8851463
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:41:54 Post No.8851463 [Report]

Don't use capitalization stylistically.
It's meme-ish.
Second of all, metaphors are best subtle.

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:44:51 Post No.8851478
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:44:51 Post No.8851478 [Report]

>>8851463
It's how I emphasize certain words

Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:53:22 Post No.8851512
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Anonymous 2016-12-17 01:53:22 Post No.8851512 [Report]

>>8851363
3/10 shitpost

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