this poem is titled "timshel"
I sink into the wall,
And staring up i saw,
Im alone in all my thoughts,
Too afraid to be crazy i run,
It always finds me driving right through town,
With the windows down i fly,
Its the feeling spring has brought,
But an eye for the winter's what i got,
It always finds me...
So tonight,
When i left here,
All i said was goodbye and thats alright,
No "i'll see you later",
I've been trying my whole life,
And if its an eye for an eye why cant i get this right,
Im too slow to go fast,
Im too nervous to do that,
So i run, run away why should I...
I take my chances slow,
After all it's no one's fault,
But the pain seems to crave my life,
So ashamed of my weakness i lie,
It always finds me...
does it have anything to do with east of eden?
>>8840201
Didn't read it. Sounded gay.
>>8840201
Who is that and why does it look like Chloe Moretz?
>>8841580
lurk more in /fit/
thats chloe alright, shes been lifting.
>I sink into the wall,
>And staring up i saw,
>Im alone in all my thoughts,
Read this out loud to yourself. Your poem breaks itself in the first three lines
Also try using enjambment at all