Poetry

sorry its sideways

how do you write up and down like that?

>>8788384i look autistic af now

>>8788380
what do you know? you know it's terrible too.
tho i'd've expected something a bit better from a high schooler. this reads more like an elementary schooler's -who knows a few more words than usual- homework.

>>8788380
very cringy, dont show to anybody.

>>8788399
what do you want to* know?

>this is considered acceptable for an 18 year old
Public education was a mistake.

>>8788432
not really. OP on the other hand....

end your misery ohpee

>18 years americans cannot write in cursive
Poor infantilized nation

English 7? What the fuck is that?

>>8788501
>>8788502
It's obvious the poem was written by a 12 year old in the seventh grade.

>>8788502

Probably 7th grade english

>>8788505
or a 17 year old in 7th grade

>>8788492
I'm kinda replying to everyone in general here. Yes I turned this in and yes I will probably get either a B or a C on this. That is sad but I'm not good at English and I really hate poetry. I wont get any bad criticism because this is normie English so it doesn't matter. Obviously public education is flawed and you don't have to try. How would you feel if I told you I am a senior in high school next year going to k-state on a scholarship for engineering. BTW I have an A in english

>>8788788
>BTW I have an A in english

Damn.....you showed us. Shut me right the hell up.

Is this a joke?

>>8789050
Sadly no

>>8789050
Well...in a way

>>8788788
I would laugh at you. K state is a shit school.

>>8788380
You said you would have no metaphors yet you say the poem is garbage. Fail/10

That was intentional and if you say K-state is a shit school I don't really care I expected someone to say something like that anyways. Why is it a shit school btw what experience do you have there... none?

>>8790426
What experience does anybody have there? None.

>>8792329
rekt
>>8790426
You sound like an anti-intellectual ass with a serious Dunning-Kruger effect.

>>8788380
My opinion is that you should stop dicking around and write a real poem. Jesus, writing bad poetry is one of the few things teenagers can actually do reliably. If you can't, write a mechanical poem or two and make your teacher earn his pay. Look, here's some I did for school. For bonus points, don't tell them they were generated randomly and watch people try to analyze them.

Mechanical Poems
(Method- cut text into strips, tore strips up in handfuls, allowed cat to play with them. Wrote down whatever I could read at the end of that process, then re-stirred)

1.
language in detail is true what legs
as an extrication the terms of a
poem as primarily positions but the willing to allow what of iro tail
the cal- po find uses illogical souls
symbols

2.
“Telescoped” statement, we
it is from of a very darkness
poet: Irony in this general loose
philosopher tial celebrat for ulation
I ewed meaning but as a “proved”
of the the ideal language wor pect
away from

3.
rest in powerful sort in
water “Canonization” as is a tr
snake legs even forward formulation
willing to allow The should be
a logical proof
pressure of the

4.
degree far beyond true of thi
tage’ show of logic
as primarily ploys it to ov
proof is found a pair
his staple one
and there

5.
precisely Tears
speare of the but
dislocate language into mean ical proof
approaching “shadowing”
word as th the I maintain
need to be
the ordering of the

6.
not as a discrete particle
is the child who is the be
as well man revived interest
ironic larger wholes of poetry
figures like
snow of logic


Cross-out Poems
(Method- crossed out whatever bored me)

1.
immersed
in the pool of water, warped and bent the
not logical
a clean image
images
elaborate souls

2.
“Idle Tears”
a profound thrust
exerted and played one against the other. a point of view—
the child who is
a kind of darkness—
shadowy growth into
a prison.


3.
The symbols do
not change aspire
warped into new meanings
dislocate d consider
the relationship nexus

4.
played the light
proceeds extrication but
abstract ?
pure in advanc ing
stand contain
constant