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>>8729805
>also, I want to distract my readers from my bad content.
typical prose stylist mindset.

Don't think it works like that. It's not about collecting the best words, Donald.

For a while try banning yourself from writing words you don't use in everyday conversation. Look for the musicality in ordinary words and try to make them flow.

>>8729839
how did you know my name?

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>>8729926
We are one, Donald.

>>8729839
>>8729956
but how would that distract my audience and make them think i am smarter than them?

simple words are dull and not aesthetically pleasing.

>>8729973
Alone, they are dull. Put them in the right arrangement, they become a nice sounding sentence.

>>8729982
it doesn't look majestic or grandeur though, that's what's more important to me.

>>8729989
>simple words don't sound majestic
show me words with weight like simple colors, words like blood and stone, words like tremble and god. You won't find any that aren't equally small and old.

>>8729805
>content>all
once the dust settles the reader is not going to remember the details of the prose but they will recall the overall content.

>>8730176
no, the reader would remember he couldn't completely understand the book and that he has to read it again to have a better understanding