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Amateur SciFi 2016-11-13 23:02:07 Post No. 8720498
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Amateur SciFi Anonymous 2016-11-13 23:02:07 Post No. 8720498 [Report]
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ydp34c2AEqUAs_N-NZARWbUeppx7DOM_12XKX564Hzo/edit?usp=sharing

What do you niggas think about this? The first few pages were written 3 word story style so ignore them if you want, it starts to pick up halfway through chapter 1
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Anonymous 2016-11-13 23:21:39 Post No.8720565
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Anonymous 2016-11-13 23:21:39 Post No.8720565 [Report]
Rewrite first pages without memes and overbearing past tense
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 01:31:35 Post No.8721022
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 01:31:35 Post No.8721022 [Report]
>>8720565
What about the rest of it?
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 01:40:56 Post No.8721042
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 01:40:56 Post No.8721042 [Report]
>>8721022
It reads like a first draft of someone who hasn't written much else. How far are you along in your process?
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 01:41:58 Post No.8721046
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 01:41:58 Post No.8721046 [Report]
>>8720565
>overbearing past tense
Yeah, that stuck out to me to.
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 02:52:27 Post No.8721294
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 02:52:27 Post No.8721294 [Report]
>>8720565
>>8721046
>overbearing past tense
That changes about halfway through chapter 1

>>8721042
You're not wrong and there are currently three chapters
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 02:53:29 Post No.8721298
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Anonymous 2016-11-14 02:53:29 Post No.8721298 [Report]
>>8721294
three chapters complete that is*
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