I sing the swords and spears and Him, the fated fleer,
which came from Troya’s bays unto Lawina’s shores,
who hither thither thrown to oceans, nations far,
by Yuno’s Wrath and by Her holy, haughty Force,
this all and war endured, to build the wallèd Town,
to Latyum bring the Rites, from whence Latinum’s Race,
our Alba’s Fathers thus, and highest Roma’s Walls.
I'm finna bust a nut onto this niggas balls
>>8712458
We have dedicated critque threads. Post in there and I'd be glad to give you some pointers
Kill yourself and I'll be glad to critique your performance
>>8712458
>wallèd
Just don't. This isn't the 18th century anymore.
>>8712591
I only half agree with this. Do this, but don't do nothing but this and only use it when it's perfect to.