fap story

>>8656271
>bad comma placement
>run-ons on run-ons
Prospective boner killed

>>8656281
i've read worse
i think she has potential and knows how to tell a story
didnt affect my boner

>>8656287
Listen kid, we dont read women here. Take this somewhere else

>>8656271

>"If I have the opportunity to do something kinky, I'm going to do it."
>"I have never been the type of girl to be openly slutty."

women

>>8656293
>Sylvia Plath
>Jane Austen
>Viginia Woolf
Speak for yoursefl, pseud.

>>8656275
>He was the nerdy type kind of shy and quiet, but that's what attracted me about him
>this is written by a girl
>He was the nerdy type kind of shy and quiet, but that's what attracted me about him
>this was written by a girl
>He was the nerdy type kind of shy and quiet, but that's what attracted me about him
>written by a
>He was the nerdy type kind of shy and quiet, but that's what attracted me about him
>girl

Aye mate definitely sounds like it was written by a girl mate not some sweaty neckbeard mate definitely

>>8656298
>men dislike women who are too hard to approach and play with them as they make sexual advances
>men also dislike women who are too "easy", dismissing them as whores or sluts
Men.

>>8656269
>no diapers, infantilism, soft femdom or feminization involved
I feel disdain for normies.

>>8656281
gotta give her props too, because from what I read on her profile at the site, she's a foreigner. better english than most people I know who were actually born in english speaking countries

>stepbrother
>not actual brother
Dropped.

>>8656305

Isn't it about time you fess up you wrote that, OP?

>>8656269
>it's another "poorly written erotica" episode
I wonder if an episode where erotica it's actually good will ever be made.

>>8656313
i actually didn't. she commented something about writing stuff on a thread about fucking young chicks on /b/ and i checked it out

>>8656313
only shared because i liked the storytelling

>>8656315
>>8656317
Yeah, I'm sure. It's pretty lame, even for porn, m8.
Better luck next time.

>>8656280
>I just glared at him like a tiger watching his prey

Holy..... I want more.....

>>8656299

>>8656330
if you're on nofap its pretty good

>>8656337
i'm reading another one about her trying to seduce her chemistry teacher, but ending up fucking his wife
now that i can compare the two that i read, i think this one about the chem teacher is better
weirdly it was cheaper in btc then the virginity one
but some dudes might get mad if i post it lol

>>8656337
Obvious gender swap is obvious, well unless you are too horny to care of course.

>>8656348
I wouldn't tho

>>8656364
i feel kind of bad for sharing stories she's charging for but hold on a second ill take some prints of it

>>8656271

>I shall begin this story by explaining that my stepbrother and I not related

Dropped.

>>8656302

To be fair most erotica is written by women so it's not out of the question, that being said this is absolute trash and there's much better stuff on Literotica (albeit obviously still not good) for free.

>>8656340

If you're on nofap, even a vacuum cleaner starts to look like the most erotic device on the planet.

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>>8656364

>this is the start of the chem one
there are like 11 prints to this one

>>8656372

You have to be some kind of a super retard to pay money for this. As evident as it already is.

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>>8656393

>"No, you got it wrong because with pressure there is a volume increase."
>"Kind of like what would happened if I touched someone's crotch?"

What a seductress
oh god I'm dying

>>8656399
>They pretend to moan the lawn

the last print was the end.

>>8656415
>that awkward moment when you laughed at some parts, but you also got a boner
dunno how to feel about this

>>8656271
>I shall begin this story by explaining my stepbrother and I are not blood related

stopped here

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>>8656395
missing print for this part

>>8656269
Liked the last story better than the second. She's no Marquis de Sade, but I have to agree she knows how to story-tell.
She just has to learn proper punctuation, but I think overall she has a little talent. Who's she?

>>8656443
>Liked the last story better than the first.

>>8656443
>she
trap threads are more convincing

>>8656443
she writes content on bitnudes dot com
goes by the name of blairs secret spot

>>8656443
>>8656448
Really, you can stop shilling now, okay?

>>8656406
>I felt a wave run from the top of my head and the sole of my feet. My feet got numb and I couldn't help but to arch my back at that overwhelming feeling. I wanted to moan, but no sound would come out. I had completely lost my breath and my voice. I clenched my fist on Amanda's hair and felt my whole body tingle. My vaginal wall muscles started involuntarily contracting and relaxing very rapidly. My hands began to shake and I felt like I was losing all muscle strength.

Damn.

Reported, roastie cunt. Enjoy your permaban.

>>8656269
What is the name of the site?

Wait a second. Is there a market for this kind of shit? Can I make a few bucks with that since no one will buy my poetry and short stories?

>>8656522
i though it was the common knowledge on lit

>>8656525
Damn, if I had known. I know girls are massive comsummers of smut, but are they also the buyers, or should I write for males?

>>8656530
You pretend to be a girl and desperate horny guys buy it. It is less about the erotica and more about the supposed insight into the woman's psyche.

>>8656530

I remember a thread about some dude who self-published dwarf porn and claimed he'd made over $2000 with it.

Jesus Christ, this is terrible. You paid money for this? With The Kristen Archives right there for free with millions of better smutty stories? Buy me a beer and I'll tell you much better true stories and bring photos of the participants.

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>buying short stories of erotica

>>8656311
This. If you do incest, don't half-arse it.

>>8656269
it is natural for men like you to crave the validation of their existence and get depressed if they fail to feel relevant, responsible, dutiful.
The best way for a man to cater his need for approval is to serve some woman (and some of her children) through emotional&financial support, which he sees as ''a childish useless submissive woman'' [or whore and he feels betrayed by her]
Men are pleased to contribute to someone else life, to support their family.

Why women are a good way to feel relevant? Because women love to be provided for and each woman will always find a man ready to please her.
[for most men, the best feeling of feeling real is when the girl moans from your cock in her pussy, or for the most impotent, their tongue in the pussy]

THe problem for men is that they are disposable in the eyes of each woman, since all men wish to serve the few women who talk to them.
Men must thus invent several ways to please women, invention and creativity which strengthen their feeling of being worthy, relevant, in touch with reality.
Men are too impotent to find other way to feel real.
Once that the a woman replaces a man by another provider, the man gets very upset and depressed.
THis leads men to think that they are better than women, stronger, smarter and that they must built a life outside women. Some men manage to indeed built an empire, but they will always loose it for some women.
Women give meaning to men and betas, no matter how successful outside women, will always give up everything for some relationship with some woman who claim to fancy them.

>>8656635
"buy me a beer"
that really made me cringe