Please give critique:
>Waking up to a dismemberment rarely means something good is happening. It's never 'SNIP! Mom made pancakes!' or 'SNIP! We decided to adopt a Golden Retriever!'
Obligatory "holy. . . . . I want more"
>interesting as fuck
i likey
>>8652697
my friends know im an extremely harsh critic, but this is nothing short of amazing. It's a masterpiece. pm me if you ever get published...
Hey guys how about this one:
>Only one enemy remained; two if you counted Allah.