I wrote an intro for my first novel (i do it, dont bother), but

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I wrote an intro for my first novel (i do it, dont bother), but what do you think:

Here is the excerpt:

"My asshole is clean. My ass is shaven. It aint itching. Whatsoever. Life goes on as the hair grows behind my back, until it reaches an infinity cove. You see white, i see black. As long as it doens´t reach your head, everything is ok. Cut it. Songs of solitude that remind me of my misery. Questions? I live as it goes on. Wrong. I am growing, despite my backlashes. Consider myself as a lunatic, who tries too much. Nothing wrong with trying, but iam on an endless road. A road of concrete, tarmac and an autunal atmosphere. Sentences don´t make sense. So i cut it: „Iam rolling down this road, a river of sadness/got all my things in my backpack/lonely roads, lonely paths/they all come by, but hey will pass“. Sooner or later i will get a job."