>The author uses more commas than full stops.
>author constantly introduces the subject 4/5ths of the way through extended sentences with multiple clauses
And this is why nobody likes Henry James.
>>8581162
James is GOAT, ya dingaling.
>>8581162
good exercise
>>8581155
>author puts a full stop where should be a comma
>>8581155
>Author writes sentences no longer than fifteen words throughout an entire novel.