One person writes a short story and then we all work together revising it.
>>8526855
I think it would have been better if you provided the short story, OP, or if you were never born at all.
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A drink of water. AH hA haha ha, never dwelt a drop of water that quarrelsome. NEedless to say, it's only a matter of time.
>>8527064
I grabbed the recipient, a sponge, I pressed it over my mouth, the holy water dripping on my face, shiny, in my mouth and it was sweet sweeter than ever and oh so colourful each drop, if it happened to fall on my stretched out tongue, brought acid rainbow to mind and off I went down the river into the sea on a bark it was good we made it.
I hate this place, but I have a reason for being here; morbid fascination. the people who come here, the passing truckers, the business men, the gangsters, the family vacationers, all the wretches of society, its trash and deepest desires rising up from the bottom. Every Tom G., Dick and Harry, would show up here eventually. People looking for pleasures in the form of greasy food and titillating young women in floss underwear, would come to AppleCheeks.
Old man Stephan would come in each time every month when the checks arrived, he'd saunter in with a big grin on his face, wearing his x-large work t-shirt that his wafer thin body barely supported. The girls loved him, he usually slips twenties in their unmentionables.
It was like the day before and every single day before that. Annie Clark, cereal milk purple hair soaking in the wind, knees place firmly beside my bed, praying over my sleepless body. To herself, but for God to her, she wished again that she could become me. We both waited for the answer, I knew what was coming, Annie didn't know what could happen this time.
>>8527923
*to hear