Im writing a novella that might end up a graphic novel if my friend is on board.
Here is an exert, What do you think of my prose?
'RANE: ‘I had lost myself in the unconscious and irrational justification for my destructive behavior- a hunger for substance induced somnolence overwhelms me.
And like a primal desire, it rattles at my innermost center.’
novelladerane Dot wordpress Dot com
Looking for freelance story boarders. WIll pay via pay pal.
>>8415479
Also, Ive already sealed the deal with the publisher. but no advance until i get the story board down.
The book is based on Eve, had she lived until the present day.
you plagiarized that artwork from charles burns you stupid nigger
>>8415515
Yes and I gave credit on my sight, I am not claiming that to be the cover, hece me need for graphic artists, Its just a rough outline
>>8415479
You need remedial grammar and spelling lessons before you start making pompous word salads, OP. I followed your link to see if "my sight" was an auto-correct slip. It wasn't.
Rane – ‘I was slowly loosing [LOSING] myself in the unconscious and irrational justification for my destructive behavior- a hunger for a substance[-]induced stupor overwhelms me, just as my desire for primitive violence. Though these people have faces, and families, their mortality makes their efforts worthless,[;] it pounds like a drum at the core of there[THEIR] being[S], while I grin – my reality splitting at the seams.’
“Lives searching for meaning. The ocean air intoxicated, the alcohol intoxicates.[WHAT THE FUCK?]
Young girls with few friends hoard the beaches [HOW DO YOU HOARD A BEACH?].. aging couples line\ the sand with little left to do – Seagulls hover in search of scraps – Said[SAD?] sailors anchor down in familiar territory. Tents are pitched in hopes of resolution, another vodka is poured in hopes of whats[WHAT'S] left of this year.”
I couldn't survive reading an entire script of that.
>'RANE: ‘I had lost myself in the unconscious and irrational justification
stopped reading there son
>>8415479
if your novella works as a graphic novel then it doesn't work as a novella
>>8415479
Are you doing it Marvel-method or more scripted?