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Im writing a novella that might end up a graphic novel if my

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Im writing a novella that might end up a graphic novel if my friend is on board.

Here is an exert, What do you think of my prose?

'RANE: ‘I had lost myself in the unconscious and irrational justification for my destructive behavior- a hunger for substance induced somnolence overwhelms me.
And like a primal desire, it rattles at my innermost center.’

novelladerane Dot wordpress Dot com

Looking for freelance story boarders. WIll pay via pay pal.
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>>8415479
Also, Ive already sealed the deal with the publisher. but no advance until i get the story board down.

The book is based on Eve, had she lived until the present day.
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you plagiarized that artwork from charles burns you stupid nigger
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>>8415515
Yes and I gave credit on my sight, I am not claiming that to be the cover, hece me need for graphic artists, Its just a rough outline
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>>8415479
You need remedial grammar and spelling lessons before you start making pompous word salads, OP. I followed your link to see if "my sight" was an auto-correct slip. It wasn't.

Rane – ‘I was slowly loosing [LOSING] myself in the unconscious and irrational justification for my destructive behavior- a hunger for a substance[-]induced stupor overwhelms me, just as my desire for primitive violence. Though these people have faces, and families, their mortality makes their efforts worthless,[;] it pounds like a drum at the core of there[THEIR] being[S], while I grin – my reality splitting at the seams.’

“Lives searching for meaning. The ocean air intoxicated, the alcohol intoxicates.[WHAT THE FUCK?]
Young girls with few friends hoard the beaches [HOW DO YOU HOARD A BEACH?].. aging couples line\ the sand with little left to do – Seagulls hover in search of scraps – Said[SAD?] sailors anchor down in familiar territory. Tents are pitched in hopes of resolution, another vodka is poured in hopes of whats[WHAT'S] left of this year.”

I couldn't survive reading an entire script of that.
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>'RANE: ‘I had lost myself in the unconscious and irrational justification

stopped reading there son
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>>8415479
if your novella works as a graphic novel then it doesn't work as a novella
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>>8415479
Are you doing it Marvel-method or more scripted?
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