Wanting to write my first story, let me get some advice on my intro?

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Wanting to write my first story, let me get some advice on my intro? 2016-08-17 02:36:33 Post No. 8406328
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Wanting to write my first story, let me get some advice on my intro? Anonymous 2016-08-17 02:36:33 Post No. 8406328 [Report]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lb3sLVSA1yvuKCxZFM5-FzN5KrWsmPrxq2vvWK42IC4/edit

I'd like some advice on my writing style so far so I can make my story better as I continue further.

its a story about dying and journeying into the ends of all creation past the darkness of space.

Anonymous 2016-08-17 02:37:34 Post No.8406330
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Anonymous 2016-08-17 02:37:34 Post No.8406330 [Report]

Post it in the critique thread.

Anonymous 2016-08-17 02:45:43 Post No.8406350
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Anonymous 2016-08-17 02:45:43 Post No.8406350 [Report]

>>8406330
link pls

Anonymous 2016-08-17 03:18:32 Post No.8406433
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Anonymous 2016-08-17 03:18:32 Post No.8406433 [Report]

>>8406350
No? Use the catalog.

Wanting to write my first story, let me get some advice on my intro?

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