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Short Story Critiques 2016-07-01 04:01:39 Post No. 8227598
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Short Story Critiques Anonymous 2016-07-01 04:01:39 Post No. 8227598 [Report]

Hello /lit/ I have posted many stories here before. Some with good reception and others with lots of criticism.

This is a thread for short stories, I will read and critique any posted here. I have posted one I am working on for a competition as well.

Thanks /lit/

Anonymous 2016-07-01 04:02:04 Post No.8227601
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>>8227598
Here is the story

Anonymous 2016-07-01 04:13:57 Post No.8227651
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>>8227598
bump

Anonymous 2016-07-01 06:10:11 Post No.8227998
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Anonymous 2016-07-01 06:10:11 Post No.8227998 [Report]

>>8227598
Its pretty good. You need to finish it though.

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