The Skinny girl and the Fat girl We can play Supermon withal

poem i'm into, title needs work

>>8161725
suggestions?

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Xenagogue

Meant the indication
Sliver Plume (possible car accidents)
Moist Net,
Trying to count the trees, the mountains, the white onyx step stones, the graves, the trash
Know to not try
Shave the back of your neck to impress yourself
Oh! Sloppy handwriting; practice in correspondence to pretty inmates (reference inmate numbers here)
The men whom paved the tunnels
They call us their names, and think proud.

>>8161756
Couldn't say, but ideally something that either matches or compliments the rhythm and diction of the poem a more. "The Skinny Girl and The Fat Girl" is too long and too fully coherent.

>>8161793
hate it

>>8161803
Always felt a title should say everything about a poem in a sentence or so - howbeit, I know where you're coming from.

As if to give everything away instantly - what's the worth of the other context?

basically, a bonus! (if at all pulling interest)

>>8161793
>>8161803
hate it as in?