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Ra Santana (ID: !DxSYyNJo7A)
raps 2016-05-31 07:23:24 Post No. 8104260
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Which parts should I edit?
Does anyone have any input that can help me? I'm doing this to the song slippin by dmx
Blank expressions behind a smile
More resent held when nigguhs tryna style
I keep my hopes up but is it worthwhile
Tears run long like the river nile
I deal with problems head on no time to face denial
Another lone soul in the jungle of the wild
They tryna take me for a ride but fuck a curisile
Yes I walk with God but do we walk miles
I'm tripping I'm stallin I gotta come up
Keep flippin ballin I can't give up
Money and my soul is what I can't give up
To my own standards I try to live up
Liquor stay invading my liver
Life always got something new to deliver
Another knife in your back
Another arrow pulled from the quiver
Is how I feel nowadays so who can I serve up for dinner
Where I’m from there rarely comes a winner
The heat I brung made dudes wish for winter
We ain’t the same killa
I’m from a different cloth
Im mixed wit different broths
I’m in with different broads
I vote democrat yet I rarely follow laws
That shit just not for us
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>>8104260
Thanks for once again confirming that hip hop is a disgrace to both literature and music. My advice is to stop listening to the laziest and least creative genre in pop music history and fuck off back to your containment board
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>>8104287
-Trump supporter
Would appreciate constructive feedback
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>>8104260
>durrr ooh ooh aah aah monkey noises
>>>/trash/
fuck off back to africa and take your boo wop doo wop deebie deebie skeebie deebie shit with you. You are shit encrusted asshole of Western civilization.
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>>8104260
That shit go hard bruh.
I'm not a lyricist like you so I Dont have much input.
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>>8104287
>ques white person making another love song to the tune of a guitar
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>>8104319
-Trump supporter
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>>8104260
Laughably terrible bait, but a couple idiots did bite- 4/10
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>>8104260
>I vote democrat yet I rarely follow laws
This is a parody, right?
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>>8104347
Show me what a good rap should be then.
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>>8104324
>"ques" illiterate retard to open his mouth
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>>8104350
What's wrong with it?
Should I change it?
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>>8104260
>>/mu/
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dammmmn homie that shits be poppin
rate mine b
TEARZ STILL FLOWIN by YUNG CUZZIN
livin on deez streetz
it so fuckn ugly
get dat fckn grip
its so fckn money
ride this one out
god above love me
seein thru theez tearz
it so fckn fuzzy
wonderin sometime
why the whiteboy gotta own me
kill a fckn cop
it so fckn funny...
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>>8104413
you sound like a 50 year old white dad who wears cargo shorts
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