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I know its not very good I just needed somewhere to post it 2016-05-30 09:08:33 Post No. 8100420
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I know its not very good I just needed somewhere to post it
Anonymous
2016-05-30 09:08:33
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Im scared of you and everyone
and wouldn’t you be overdone
The so slight so lice a linger
Tell you all right might finger
Trusting long sloppy bet
Turning Evil East Coast West
Return and chill to the western landed
for a year then re publican
in and out of rain and dry
to learn the drugs and culture why
I’m over back tight near the home that brought us in
alone, turned out, residences those for never being
borne without’
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>rhyme
not poetry
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>>8100429
what is it?
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Anyone here speaks portuguese?
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>>8100606
oui
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>>8100606
Sim, porquê?
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>>8100420
You're adhering to structure and language more than a message. Use concrete details before ever thinking about witty linguistics that don't really have weight, especially connected images that tell a story. You have an eye for interesting word play but you aren't saying anything, and poetry is all about making a statement.
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>>8100620
I was trying to be cryptic I guess. It all has meaning. I appreciate the critique.
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>>8100620
This is a silly question, but what kind of statement should I be aiming for?
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