what does 4chan think of my writing

Juvenile

"i would prefer not to"

not even a single meme. What am I supposed to do with this shit?

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>>8077178

Repetitive and pretentious. 8/10 You'll go far

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my purr-posed identities :3

our-posed stood for purpose and proposed at once... hopefully that made sense

>>8077207
as the man who posted
>>8077199
I will say that this post
>>8077207
inspired me to actually read the poem.

Please hold for feedback.

ok I made it through the first stanza before I had to stop.

"words of meaning" is so fucking horrible dude why did you write that shit, i'm going to go out on a limb here and help you because I'm drunk and feeling charitable.

Read this:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kenning

>>8077237
>inspired me to actually read the poem
wait, it was a poem?

yeah a poem

>Christ, Marx, Wood, and Wei
>Led us to this perfect day.
>Marx, Wood, Wei, and Christ;
>All but Wei were sacrificed.
>Wood, Wei, Christ, and Marx
>Gave us lovely schools and parks.
>Wei, Christ, Marx, and Wood
>Made us humble, made us good.

this children's rhyme from a sf book is better than your poem, op

i mean it deals better with reciting a list of something

good or bad, all criticisms are appreciated :P
-op