Create a poem that rhymes. Amaze me. Talk about depression and

>>7643646
Fuck off.

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>>7643648
Fuck off. Beautiful. I love it. The title packs a punch. If you're not shy please share your words.

>>7643646

Everything which passes
before my eyes
Is skewered and cries
by a sickly bespectacled surmise
That places all the world in an unmade bed
of preserving fluid, and instead
of denouement
There is only
words
that go unsaid

>>7643662
Is this OC? I actually enjoyed it.

>>7643667

Yep. And thanks.

>>7643662
I liked it as well.

>>7643646
All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places, worn out faces

>>7643797
nigga u just ripped that straight off a song.

the world is an ocean
and the sky and the sea
are empty to me

a silent nothing, placed
beneath the earth's suffocating embrace
to lose wind, to lose sight
and be washed in endless night
for the crows, for the crows
waiting patiently for me
and my drowning body
soon
i'll float up to the surface
worthless as i ever was

>>7644007
That's deep man. You really put effort into this. I like it. I mean that in the literal sense... seeing as how the world is an ocean.

>>7643646
I am a neet
my life cannot be beat
copypasta is my delight
my imagination takes flight
videogames i play
between reading hemmingway
I eat sherbert
then imagine riding worms with herbert
because i am hikki
my bedsheets are icky
drink frapes
while shitposting pepes
chicken tendies I earn
from 4chan I learn
my dog is old
where it shits quite bold
peepee poopoo all over the floor
the decore I do adore
normies I hate
bluepill they ate
B.E. B.E. B.E. yourself
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

why wake up and feel self worth
when my sausage has so little girth

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>>7643646
>Talk about depression and being undervalued.
Why has poetry degenerated so much in the last century that this bullshit is pretty much the default subject?
No Significant Emotion. Not even memeing this time, this is pretty much the perfect example of what Eliot meant by poetry lacking a Significant Emotion.

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>>7644108
>>7644128
Give us the title for your poems.

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>>7644146
9001 fap odyssey

>>7644166
>where it shits quite bold
breath taking poetry.