Rate my poem, /lit/

>>7492374
poem? try last will and testament.

>>7492374
This is bait, right? It sounds like something a 50yo militaryfag on facebook would write.

it'd be pretty funny if it was written ironically, I guess. It seems like it's not though, so I guess it's just kind of said b8

>>7492421
Disclaimer: this isn't actually mine I got it from some national front page on fb

>>7492436
the trick is to like a shitton of ironic meme pages and to get the chrome extension that blocks the newsfeed

this ensures that you'll spend time doing important things. plus facebook won't know what you actually like because you shat up their ad-data with corey in the house meme page 299

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>>7492374
good poem bro

>>7493641

Chris Gaines was better.

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>>7492381
Very accurate.

Let's post better war poems. Sometimes simple rhyming stuff like this can be done well- I often remember this bit from Kipling's The Young British Soldier

>When you're wounded and left on Afghanistan's plains
>And the women come out to cut up what remains
>Just roll on your rifle and blow out your brains
>And go to your god like a soldier.

The whole thing is pretty good to be desu

3/10 is the best I can do. Sorry