120 days of sodom

>>10021250
Lol

What could have made it good? Genuinely curious.

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Have any of you degenerates read this shit?

>No characters
>No narrative arc
>Repetitive as hell
>So boring your eyes start to melt

It's just four undeveloped edgelords talking about how evil makes their dicks hard while fucking shit-covered lolis. It never rises above copypasta-tier shock scenes.

It's divided into 4 parts. The fact that only one part of this thing is finished is proof that there is a loving party, because just one fourth of this godawful tome is over 100 pages. The rest of it is reconstructed from notes and presented as story beats.

The first part reads like that "Scroty McBoogerballs" book from South Park. Everyone's pissing and shitting on each other, people are pissing on each other's shit, then someone vomits on the shit and uses it as lube. There are only so many ways you can combine shit, piss and semen before it all just becomes a brown blur in your head. This goes on for 150 stories. You have to admire something so bad that it makes this level of degeneracy seem boring.

Part 2 is not worth mentioning.

Parts 3 and 4 are where things get unintentionally funny.

These two are supposed to hold the most decadent, forbidden passions. Y'know, the real good stuff. In reality it just comes off as side-splitting hilarity. Included among the "most forbidden passions", along with fucking horses and decapitating dogs as you climax, are the blasphemous passions. In these you get such gems as:

>A man who has a church built in his house and hires men to pose as Fathers and deliver a sermon. As the sermon is being delivered he fucks a whore.

>A man has another man dress as a bishop. He delivers a sermon and starts to pass out the eucharist. The man then takes the eucharist, shoves it up the bishop's ass and fucks him.

>Guy kicks a crucifix around in the dirt then jizzes on it.

After that hoot n' a half comes the last part, the ULTRA X-RATED FORBIDDEN PASSIONS (Gone sexual! Going to Jail? *crying laughing emoji).

Which are just Saw traps and a guy jacks off. That's it.

>Girl gets repeatedly dunked in a pool of acid... while a guy jacks off.

>Guy hammers a girl in the head... then jacks off.

It's like HRC forgot she was writing "the campaign" and thought "Uh... I'll... have a guy jacking off while doing this... that's... that's hot, right?"

The level of absurdity that these final traps reach is just side-splitting. Keep in mind this was written in the current year, which adds to the absurdity. She describes men having anachronistically complex machines just for the purpose of jacking off. Giant pulleys capable of suspending multiple people, rooms where the entire floor is a trap-door that drops into a pool of boiling oil.

Final verdict: It's awful. The unintentionally funny bits are too few to redeem the horrific first part. Just read "120 Days of Sodom" if you want to read about vomit-inducing sexual acts.

What did you faggots think?

>>10021258

Characters for one thing. The main characters are just there to rape everyone. They have some distinctions; for example: one of them likes filth and has a 2-inch rim of shit around his asshole and another is a fat gay. Other than that they don't evolve as characters and their base personality is boring. After a few pages they start to merge together. It doesn't matter if one of them is the fat gay one since they all love pounding man-ass the same. It doesn't matter that the filthy guy loves shit when the other three eat shit like hipsters eating kale.

The side-characters are awful, too. They're just names that get cycled in the rape train.

Variety would have helped, too. The story has a very rigid structure where every day is divided into the same activities. This was supposed to go on for 120 days (4 months), as the name implies. Imagine reading 120 cycles of the same thing. The author managed to get just the first 30 days done and it starts to drag like a motherfucker at around the 10th day. Like I said, you can't do much with shit, piss and jizz before it starts to get samey.

Every month is supposed to include 150 stories each, too. So you have to sit through 150 variations of the same thing.

The writing is pretty basic, too. It describes the acts in a very 'matter of fact' way.


"The Duc calls Side Characters A, B and C to his alcove. He makes B frig him while he eats a turd from C's ass. As he finishes he yells a most alarming blasphemy."

Fucking riveting.

>>10021279
I see. Your description probably makes it sound funnier and more interesting than it actually is. The movie version is shitty too ...literally. I asked because I have a short story that involves some sadistic activity but I mostly want to make fun of this sort of thing.

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>>10021278
Funny thing is Hilary's life is full of MORE rape and pedophilia than 120 days.

>>10021284
The movie is garbage. It's whole message is "Nazis are bad"

Oh shit, you don't say? Them Nazis was bad folk? Well shit, good thing there's a pretentious fucking porno passing itself off as an art film to tell me that otherwise I woulda thought that them goose-steppers were swell fellers.