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Grammar fixes are needed ASAP! 2017-08-23 11:40:55 Post No. 78658885
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Grammar fixes are needed ASAP! 2017-08-23 11:40:55 Post No. 78658885
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Fix my grammar mistakes, please. Is this text correct?
the text:
You can start to play, just click on any cell for it. If you want to reset existed game or start new game - click on the green button on the bottom of the page. Game will be ended when someone have been won. Enjoy!
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May be this myself-updated text is more correct?
The text:
You can start to play, just click on any cell for it. If you want to reset existed game or start a new game - click on the green button on the bottom of the page. Game will be ended when someone has been won. Enjoy!
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>>78659009
You can start to play, you just need to click on any cell to do it. If you want to reset the existing game, or start a new one, click on the green button on the bottom of the page. The game will end when someone has won. Enjoy!
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>>78659009
The "for it" seems redundant.
"When someone has been won" maybe "when someone has won"?
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>>78659103
Just a suggestion, but for the first sentence "You can start to play by clicking on any cell." might work better.
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>>78659131
then again that's an incomplete sentence so, "You can start to play the game by clicking on any cell." would actually be more correct.
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>>78659163
>>78659131
>>78659108
>>78659103
Thank you, guys!
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>>78659163
why not "start playing"?
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The final text with your advices and fixes is here:
You can start to play the game by clicking on any cell. If you want to reset the existing game, or start a new one, click on the green button on the bottom of the page. The game will end when someone has won. Enjoy!
Is it perfect now?
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>>78659318
start to play is just more formal desu
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>>78659323
Sounds good
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>>78659340
Thank you so much!
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>>78658885
Don't change it. Leave it as-is and attach your name so that people know it was written by a Russian. Russians communicating in broken English are super cute.
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>>78659323
>Is it perfect now?
Almost. Just one word needs changing:
You can start to play the game by clicking on any cell. If you want to reset the existing game, or start a new one, click on the green button at the bottom of the page. The game will end when someone has won. Enjoy!
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