>>78392628
looks fairly good, maybe a little dense. you probably should have scoured the top more.
Here's a really good book on baking bread, the pdf is kind of bad not sure if there is a better free copy out there
http://cpliz.com/books/CookBooks/BakingBreads/Bread%20Baker%27s%20Apprentice,%20the.pdf
>>78392628
best there is, bar none
>>78392945
Thank you
>>78393068
good
>>78393001
not so good