Can i get some critique on this please?

yeah its shit

>>3127462
>Only constructive criticism

The colors are alright. The anatomical face proportions are messed up. Study chin and cheekbones

>>3127447
the color is cool

the left eye is fucked up

>>3127504
>>3127512
Thank you guys

>>3127522
the eyes are too apart from each other. In that perspective they should be even closer. It's a begginer mistake, try to correct it

The colour is better than beginner, but you can study more how the hair works

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>>3127447
I tried to do redlines, but I didn't draw the nose because I'm not good at them. Perhaps some other anon can help here with a better redline. I think it's because mainly of the shape of the face, the chin as other anon pointed out. Also, the neck felt a little weird as well because it's too inwards. Touch your neck anon, feel the curvature!

>>3127741
>I tried to do redlines

Stop trying.

>>3128475
wtf, even the original looks like shit

>>3127741
omg yes...the neck. how did i not think of that. thank you. if i stare at my drawing too much i start to lose the grip

>>3128694
ikr

>>3127447
ngmi

>>3127745
Post your work. If you can't then shut the fuck up.