Gonna dump some paintings I did. Tell me what y'all think.

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feel free to tell me:

which are your favorites,
what emotion they give off,
your ranking of them,
any questions you have,
things I can do to improve them,
what they remind you of,
general comments on them,
etc. etc.

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Last one.

I have quite a few more, but posting them all would be overkill.
Just ask if you wanna see more, though.

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Out there maybe many miles away someone hunches over a screen and presses post.

You are similar to Tina Berning

http://www.tinaberning.de/100-girls-on-cheap-paper

>>3118255
Probably is my favourite or the one above, you are also a bit like Rouault also who you may like to look at closer

They would work well with a collection of still life's (your empty beer bottles or somethig) and some visionary type trees and houses at night

Then you would be well worth exhibiting and collecting if you found the right group and were the right sort (art world's prejudices not mine ducks)

The scraped on white then died over paint is not as good as the last one, which again I like a lot.

There is a limit to what you're expressing though,

Maybe look to Chagal?

(standard counterfeit disclaimer)

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>>3118271
Thanks for the comment.
I love those 100 girls on cheap paper paintings. Thanks for showing them to me. They're gorgeous.
Chagall too definitely has a lot to offer. He captures whimsy so perfectly.

>>3118342
You're quite a way away from whimsy, I suppose you've got some working out to do

>>3118350
I wasn't going for whimsy, but it's something I hope to explore in the future

>>3118262
This one stood out to me, but in a sense that it let me find the way to describe what throws me a little off from enjoying your pictures.
Keep in mind that it's a very intuitive observation, but the lines in this picture don't seem to be working well with what is being built. There is this disturbed, wonky face, but the lines just sit there aimlessly on top of the face. They don't connect "with" it. Maybe it's intentional, but to me it seems like there's more potential in matching the flow of the lines and also the brushstrokes better with the faces. I get that it's supposed to be messy, but maybe some more control over the chaos would "tie" the outer form of the pictures a little better to the idea they are supposed to convey.
The very first picture you posted seemed nice to me, it has this messy look, but the mess compliments the picture well.

>>3118359
I can totally see what you mean. Thanks for the very in-depth feedback. I appreciate it.

I like chaotic lines, but I'll play around with incorporating more order.
I want something wild, but not too messy.

Are you mates with Charles Thomson?

>>3118552
No. I don't know who that is. Why do you ask?

>>3118564
Shot in the dark

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>>3118576
This Charles Thomson, or just some Charles Thomson that you know? Just wondering

>>3118578
Yes, the stuckist group.

>>3118585
I wasn't familiar with him, but upon reasearchig him I find his school of thought very interesting

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Bumpppppping with a charcoal drawing I did

>>3118851
You're all over the place now

>>3118851
This one seems alright, I think the small folds - they're almost part of the texture, I don't know what those are called - work nice with your strokes in this case. But other than that, the values in the background seem a little flat and the face and the hand look very like symbol drawing.
Like I said it looks alright, but I suppose the standards are higher on this board.

Do you have a link to more of your stuff?

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>>3119595
Im really not tryna self-promote, but since you asked, you can find a lot of my work here:

https://www.etsy.com/shop/SamsArtStore/

>>3119479
That charcoal drawing is from earlier in the summer, whereas the other paintings I posted are more recent.

Bumppppppp

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>>3118245
I like this one the best. Very melancholic. Excellent selection of color, from the pale contour of her face, the purple radiance around her fading into a darker background, with a nice touch of blue shading, especially well placed between her finger and chin. The appearance of a balding spot and the overly exagarrated suction of her cheeks greatly adds to the atmosphere.

I would have made the consistency of her face similar to pic related, but that's just my personal taste.

>>3118247
>>3118249
>>3118252
Promising potential here

>>3118253
>>3118262
>>3118265
>>3118342
If I hadn't seen your other works, I would think of you as a pretentious hack shitting out sloppy works, all the while hiding a lack of discernable skill and dedication to practice behind a post-modern notation of art.

>>3118255
>>3118259
A mix between the good and bad. Nothing outstanding.

>>3118851
If you intention was to make this creepy, you should have added more subtelty besides the right eye.

>>3118253
>>3118255
>>3118262
i like your colours anon
>>3118247
>>3118245
>>3118249
i feel like if your anatomy was a little better these would be so much better, like in the hands

keep it up senpai