GUys, this is my latest painting. I wanted to make a painting

ironically shit like this could be worth something.

How does it feel knowing that some modern artist is making bank while you fags grind fundamentals hoping to get recognized?

>>3106465
Looks good. Try an under drawing in charcoal on your next picture.

>>3106465
good composition, maybe try a limited palette next time. less is more sometimes

the tiles have a nice decorative feel to it, but the blue and orange are really distracting in the composition.

>>3106465
Composition: It's alright, it's balanced but could be even more balanced

Use of Color: I like the colors, the upper part of the painting has a really nice combination of colors

Brushwork: You could work a little on your brush strokes, make them a little more interesting to look at

I see more of Matisse than of Cezanne tho, but Matisse was deeply influenced by Cezanne so I guess it's fair to say that I see a little of them both here.

Don't worry if something is too deep or not, do what you want, and go ahead and explore painting without perspective. you could even do completely abstract paintings to train your brushstrokes and your use of color

But overall I like it, it's a good painting, keep it up.

Thanks guys, I'll try all the suggestions. Also planning to do abstract paintings. I just bought my first roll of canvas so that gives me a lot more confidence .

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>>3106465
The lack of perspective really makes your painting look flat desu.
You should work on making your lines look cleaner and neater too.

>>3106465
i enjoy your painting, so I will tell you,
my best advice as an artist is never come to /ic/ for advice.

>>3107702
Wrong. Good artists actually learn how to listen to the good advice on /ic/ instead of spouting the '/ic/ is bad' meme.

>>3107706
>Good artists visit a 4chan board filled with autists, memes, and anime for critique

Think about what you've said