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Aye. I'd post this in /beg/ but I've been doing art my whole life. Don't feel like it tho

Just looking for critique so don't give me any shit.

Please be hardcore as I'm trying to self improve.
I'd also like to hear what you think my kind of "theme" I'm going for.

Thanks guys
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>>3105836
it looks uncanny. also is it Laci Green?
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>>3105836
I think you're going for the middle christian art style. In that case maybe the colors are too saturated, make the edges more refined so they stand out and not merge with the background.
the face seems small for the head, so I'd make that bigger next time. Her head orientation is towards the bottom right but the nose is facing towards me.
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>>3105878
My reference was not her
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>>3105886
Perfect. Thank you
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>>3105836
Don't hide the arms and hands ya fucking wuss.
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1. Why the fuck would you make the background and skin color the same?
2. Your face is shit, huge weird eyebrows, terrible proportions. Before doing a finished piece how about you go to figure drawing for a couple months or just draw from photos or something.
3. Same counts for the body. It's weirdly pushed together.

I think you're trying to go for an uncanny woman, but that's just an excuse you made half way through because you couldn't draw an attractive girl.
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>>3106595
Lol. The next ones won't be hidden. My refs right hand was hidden. The left holding a phone which I didn't want.
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>>3106604
The physique is pretty similar to the ref actually. Skin a facial features look nothing like her though. If I can find the image I'll attach. Also, the background and skin tone are a bit different in person. I do believe that the two need to be more isolated tho
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