Yandere Simulator redraws

>>3095587
>Kiwifarms
Ah yes, the reddit tier forum dedicated to doxxing people, now complete with literally /beg/ tier shit art.

>>3095588
>>3095589
>>3095590
>>3095591
This is utter shit, the edits are way worse than the originals. The one in the OP is okay though.

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>>3095594
I appreciate you taking the time to reply. Whether you have a dislikeing towards KF or not is fine, but could you give our artists critiques on their reworks? it would be much appreciated, anon!

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>>3095587
So they redraw the original artworks to make it look worse or what?

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Another redraw of the first rival in Yandere Simulator, Osana Nijimi

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>>3095600
>Tumblr nose

>>3095597
Your rendering is awful, you make everything look flat, you don't get facial expressions, you can't draw fabrics for shit and your critiques of the originals are cringy as fuck.

>>3095600
>priorities am I right
Yes you are fucking right. That's how it should be done.

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>>3095598
We are redrawing the original works to help improve the character designs and help give the characters variety in both looks and personality. If you feel it is not on par with your standards on how you perceive to be good edits, then please, give us constructive criticism. It would not only help us, but Yandere Simulator as well!

>>3095587
i hope the original artist doesn't get their feelings hurt over this, or become spiteful

i can imagine putting in the time for a bunch of illustrations, even lame ones like these, and having people shit all over them for lame taste reasons, you'd feel like people had it out for you.

good thread op.
shit before and uber shit after

>>3095606
>working for free
>working for free for exafaggot
they deserve it

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>>3095604
>Your rendering is awful, you make everything look flat
>you can't draw fabrics for shit

I appreciate your reply and taking time to critique our edits. However, I did not edit the fabric, only edited areas where I felt would be more realistic or cut off unnecessary parts such as the strand of hair on her head.

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Another redraw of the OP picture...

>>3095588
This redraw is particularly bad, she lost all expression. Also I don't know about you but I can't go outside without seeing those mini jeans on the left, but I've never seen whatever that is on the right, also what's with removing the crease under the tits? It just lacks definition now, it's not like you made her tits smaller. It seems like you're not actually trying to improve the character design but rather you're changing it to fit your preferences.

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Please /ic/, give us your honest feedbacks and constructive critiques! Again, will not only help us improve our art, edits and redesigns, but also the game itself.

In these redesigns, we try to incorporate edits/redesigns with "less stereotypical" anime designs and tropes, as YS has tons of these and we feel it is unnecessary and adds nothing new.

>>3095613
ew, i hate being reminded that people think of anime characters as white people

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>>3095617
I can understand the facial expression criticism. The reason for changing it was due to, well, Osana being a typical "tsundere" type character, and I felt her body language was enough to cover that without the use for exaggeration to show that she was a tsundere.

Both the shorts and breasts were changed due to the over-sexualization of the characters. And it does not help that they are underaged school girls. Unnecessary and no need to sexualize everything about these girls.

For this particular edit, on the breasts, that is part of the edit. Not actually what's on her original design. This is the school teacher rival in YS in a more formal outfit.

>>3095619
>us
who the fuck are you cunts?

>>3095589
Fatshaming and slutshaming edit. Nice!

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>>3095622
I don't understand what you mean by your comment? This redraw had little to nothing to do with considering that. The intention was to give her a difference in both face and body to have give her individuality but also be more "in-tune" to what her personality showed from the School club she is in (gardening) and design alone.

This edit is by another artist other than kjech, however, I do not know who they are. They are one of YandereDev's volunteer for artists. If I recall correctly, she is the "little sister" rival for senpai.

>>3095610
>only edited areas where I felt would be more realistic or cut off unnecessary parts
Well, first of all, you feel wrong, and secondly, you don't understand style.

>>3095605
Here the original is actually more realistic and just looks better.

>>3095610
Here her tights were fine, they were so tight to accentuate her thighs. A lot of the things you "fix" are there to show form or make the silhouette better and more readable. Like here >>3095619 the back of the knee on his right leg, those folds help to break the line of the leg, to make it look like a leg. That, and I think it's actually more realistic than in your edit.

Is this bait?
Sure they were never good to start with but every edit makes them even worse.

>>3095634
>tights
I mean stockings.

>>3095627
17 year old girls have wide hips and some have big tits, a lot of them wear revealing clothes as well, get over it.

>>3095605
>Unnecessary hole
Whole outfit is unnecessary. Still stupid reason for such edits.
As well as pity annoyance with antennas.

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>>3095630
As stated in my original post, I am one of the artists for these redraws/edits. However, others have also contributed in help for redesigning these characters. We are from Kiwifarms. If you are more curious on us, you can find the original thread here:

https://kiwifarms.net/threads/fix-alexs-shit-designs.31778/

Of course, you will be able to see the other edits and redraws in this website, but I'd also like to contribute to my thread and posting them here in hopes to gain more helpful artists and more insight to the original/redraws.

>stylistic choices and sexy girls are bad you dirty het pig mmmmk?

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>>3095634
I see, thank you for taking the time to critique some of the edits posted. I will fix those mistakes regarding the silhouettes and such.

Another artist giving insight to redesigning the first rival and arguably the most wellknown/popular rival yet to be implemented into the game, Osana Nijimi. say what you will about the quality of the art itself if you feel it isn't proper, the critique we are looking for here is outfits.

Isn't this game a fetish game? I see nothing wrong with emphasizing crotches and tits if that's the case. Most of the edits here are pointless and some are to the point of nitpicking, making shit worse. I think >>3095617 is right with
>you're not actually trying to improve the character design but rather you're changing it to fit your preferences.

It's exactly what you're doing. Does the original artist even know what you're doing with their work?

>every edit makes them look more tumblr
Wew

>>3095627
I bet all edits are done by fat yet smallbreasted girl. Also if you would leave your room, you would see that real girls today ARE oversexualized. Even young ones.

>>3095658
The funny thing here is that tumblrinas would get triggred if someone edited their work this way. It would be insulting to them. But this thing is somehow perfectly ok to do because the artist is sexualizing imaginary characters.

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>>3095632
>Fatshaming
>Slutshaming
What are you referring to, Anon? I never implied in the edit that she was fat nor a slut. In the original, I do not consider her "fat" either. However, the original has things about the design that I feel were extremely unnecessary. She is an underaged girl. Not only this but that does not mean that every girl NEEDS to be sexualized or have one bodytype. Same reply to the other anon about the curvyness/clothing. The original artwork for this gamd made the artwork and girls very sexual and hentai-ish.

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>>3095660
>a girl
>on kiwifarms
Good to know that you are literally delusional.

>>3095640
>fix-alexs-shit-designs
>shit
The audacity of this talentless hacks!
Ugly jealous slut-shaming bitches.

>>3095665
That's cause it's a fucking yandere simulator. Only fat weebs fapping to hentai will play it, or even they won't if the characters look like you make them.

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>>3095670
>or even they won't if the characters look like you make them

>>3095665
You implied character could not overtly express their sexuality. Also said that big hips areunnecessary.

>>3095669
>not shit
How /beg/ are you?
Both the original and the revised designs look like tumblr and /beg/ fucked and gave birth to characters with Down's Syndrome.

>>3095665
>NEEDS
But can.
And this is reason enough.
If you disagree, create some ORIGINAL characters, dont be a dictator.

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>>3095660
>>3095669
>Because I and other people make edits/redraws of what I feel is unnecessary and lacks variety with tasteless designs we MUST be extremely ugly!

I understand why these comments were made, but I don't think you understand the points we are making for these edits. You may not like my editing choices, but just because kjech has a "style" does not excuse the poor design choices, samefaceing/body and bad anatomy choices.
>>3095657
>Isn't this game a fetish game?
Not exactly, at least, judging by the way YandereDev describes the game. He wants it to be taken "very seriously" but adds in artwork like this, characters like this and implemented things like panty vending.

Thank you for the criticism though, both of you. I will fix those errors.

>>3095660
Yes, real girls even young ones would be sexualized. However, this does not mean that ALL of the characters HAVE to be hyper-sexualized. I see no issue with adding variety to the cast.


This is not a redraw but another redesign of yet again, Osana and another rival, Amai. I find the designs very cute and gives the characters both personality and sweetness.

>>3095665
Have you seen modern schoolgirls?
They are allowed to sexualize themselves, yet art cannot reflect reality?

Lets forbid them wearing such clothes on government level, and embrace purity.

>>3095679
Exactly what this guy said, if you don't like the character designs create your own damn characters instead of insulting the original artist like this. If you were fixing actual mistakes in the original artwork you'd be providing a service, but what you're doing right now is an insult.

>Attempted circle jerk over """"fixing"""" these designs/art
>every "fix" makes them worse

every time lmao

OP instead of you guys doing this bullshit, how about you all stop being beginner tier and focus on improving? God knows every single one of you needs it if this is the type of work you produce.
And, you can hate on the original artist all you want... but this person is way more successful than any of you guys. They are doing the art/designs for such a popular game and getting paid for it. If you guys are ~so~ much better that you think you're apparently capable of "fixing" these things, why can't you seem to accomplish something like that?

This is literally a waste of time. You could spend the time you're doing making nonsense edits actually trying to improve your art.

NGMI

>>3095680
Are these "designs" by one of the artists doing the edits? Can't you see that they're in no position to "fix" anything at all?

>>3095678
I agree originals are shit.
But it does not call for shit edits under a guise of help, while blatantly insulting people on the same shit mastery and same shit taste level.

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>>3095682
>>3095675
I'm not saying they can't, but the way that the artist draws these characters are tasteless. Every drawing available of YS made by kjech are extremely oversexualized to the point where it looks very comical. With every face looking like aftersex or horny faces, while their bodies are too exaggerated and no variety in different bodies.

It's a matter of uniqueness for the integrity of the game AND characters.


For example look at the artwork for this nurse rival, you do not think it looks ridiculous? Big difference between sexualization or making the girls "show off", but a whole different thing when it looks this fucking terrible and exaggerated.

>>3095640
Here's some critique:
Do redlines and redraw the character into your own style instead of trying to reproduce your style onto someone else's drawing. Try a different perspective or a different pose if you want. These edits are lazy, produce your own work of the same subject manner or even the same character.
Also you can't "fix" an amateur artist's work when you're all worse than he is. :^)

>>3095680
>ALL
In SOME games.
Is it ok if I would edit characters and tell developers to add cisgendered characters in some lgbt game like that about gay daddies?
It is they game, and if they want, they can have ALL characters as beautiful gay daddies.

>>3095680
>>3095651
This literally looks like something a 12 year old would draw

>>3095627
>>3095640
>>3095610
>>3095605
>>3095600
>>3095597
>>3095595
>>3095665

>These faces
>"Fixed"

>>3095591
>No reason to actually edit this one, other than to be nitpicky

>>3095633
>Recognises the error in anatomy
>Too unskilled to actually fix it so it still looks broken and fucked

Jesus Christ
No wonder these edits are so terrible, none of you can actually draw

>>3095587
this one looks better
>>3095588
facial expression sucks dick
>>3095589
theyre both ok, nothing wrong with original, dont know what youve got against pointed chins
>>3095590
this ones better, OG doesnt know how shirts work. nothing wrong with pointed chin but fair enough,
>>3095591
dont like either, the 'antennae' is an anime thing afaik
>>3095593
new is better
>>3095595
new face is awful
>>3095597
old is better
>>3095605
eww
>>3095610
both fine
>>3095613
ehh
>>3095616
youre right, there does need to be more /fit/-down syndrome characters
>>3095619
new is shit
>>3095640
shitt

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Ok so every edit makes the characters not only look worse due to the editor's skills being worse than the original artist but it also de-sexualizes
What's the reason for this bullshit again? Is this even permitted by the original artist?

>>3095692
This game is clearly a fetish game, you seem to have misinterpreted the creator's intent here. It may come off as tasteless and comical to you but not to the actual target audience. That nurse is hot btw.

>>3095692
>integrity of the game
Is entirely game creators business, not yours.
I hope you'll get same shit critique as you posted in this thread on everything you'll do in your life.

Original art is trash by the way, but compared to you it is high art

>>3095591
>>3095593
The singular is "antenna". The plural is "antennae". The edits are shit.

if you actually made these go practice drawing and draw your own stuff instead of wasting time on this

if you're memeing you're doing good

>>3095692
Fugly edits looks ridiculous.
Nurse looks sexy.

>>3095701
>face of a cow
>hot
Your taste is even shitter than OPs.

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>>3095701
>>3095703
I understand where you are trying to get at, but the creator makes an effort to try to call it "serious" and such. And I don't see the issue of giving constructive critcism on his WIP of the game, especially regarding the characters and art itself.

>>3095698
>12 year old would draw
The skill of the WAY it's drawn is irrelevant, we are asking for a critique over the designs. The clothes.

>complaining over the faces
I completely understand if you dislike the faces. Nothing wrong with that. But it was to give an example of adding more unique face traits to the girls rather than making every rival/girl the exact same with different hair/tits.

>>3095693
Yes, I initially thought of redlining or a redraw altogether instead of edits. However, I felt that this would be easy to incorportate the fixes shown in the edits by keeping (most) of the original art intact.

>>3095696
I feel you misunderstand, we are not trying to change things to that extreme, we are merely trying to improve the game and designs from making everything look (and become) more of a hot mess than YandereDev already made it so.


For instance, Kokona (made by a separate artist) in a casual outfit shown here. You do not think this art/design is shit and ridiculous? Criticize my skill level if you must, but the more important issue is design choices. And what's wrong with me adding definition to the face and adding noses? This artist is doing so too for their volunteer work.

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>>3095700
>implying that the original creator had any talent to begin with
It is a fucking shit deviantart tier and OP is pic related.

>>3095716
I didn't say he was 'talented'
And I don't see how artist skill has anything to do with someone else fucking with their work without permission.

>>3095692
>For example look at the artwork for this nurse rival, you do not think it looks ridiculous? Big difference between sexualization or making the girls "show off", but a whole different thing when it looks this fucking terrible and exaggerated.
Looks what you'd see in your average ecchi anime. This is a good thing, especially if she's meant to be a sexy rival and steal MC's man. Do half of you even watch anime?

I feel like a lot of these redraws take away from the anime aesthetic. For a game called 'Yandere Simulator", these redraws look very western (ie the noses). IMO the originals look and feel better.

>>3095723
The originals already looked like retarded, westernised trash. I don't know what the target audience for this is or why the dev even bothered making a game that looked so shit. Whoever made these designs in the first place need to either get Loomis or stop fucking drawing.

ITT /ic/ gets baited by /beg/ pretending to be tumblr

>>3095680
Are you pretending to be this artist? Yah they suck dick at art but there's no need to pick on kiwi fags. They are just teenage girls.

>>3095730
Whatever this is, it's hilarious.

What is here point here? I mean, in general. wouldn't it be better to draw all these characters in different poses than copying the same exact poses as the original? It would of been more interesting compare alternate designs if the poses, expressions, angles, etc weren't the same exact ones.

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I mean, just look at this garbage:

https://youtu.be/Aa7ovZGvY6o - Introduction for the female rivals of Yandere Simulator.

You guys seriously think and feel the original designs are much better than our redraws?

Not only this but you have to consider the facts about the creator of Yandere Simulator, YandereDev (Evaxephon), that speaks of nothing beyond "big tits" especially underaged ones, that he is creepy (as shown from his old GaiaOnline account) and a pedophile with garbage fucking amateur code for his little "game". Are you faggots seriously defending this ugly fuck? Really?

And for such an art and critiquing board, I have only gotten a few actual, legitimate and helpful criticisms out of most of the replies just being fucking assholes giving no insight to our work. And some are only just talking about it being fucking Anime. IT DOES NOT EXCUSE THE ART BEING GENERIC. Nor lack proper anatomy and actual uniqueness.

>>3095734
Your guy's art is equally generic and has the same quality of shit anatomy. None of you know how to draw and honestly each of you are probably as ugly/uglier and pitiful as the creator of this trash. Go back to sucking on your yeast soaked tampons.

>>3095734
don't have a breakdown dude, why not go back to your reddit forums for a while to calm down?

>>3095734
So now you move on from shitting on the artist art to shitting on his appearance? How petty can you be

>>3095714
>The skill of the WAY it's drawn is irrelevant
It's absolutely relevant. This is a total bs excuse on your part.
If you display no skill on making these characters "diverse", you show poor and little knowledge on actually doing so. And the edits you posted scream it too.

And if you think your artists' skill is bad, then obviously I am going to think their faces are bad. They cannot draw and cannot portray the diversity you guys desire, so of course they are going to look worse than the original. They don't know how to construct faces.
Look at this shit on this guy >>3095640 , you made him disgusting to look at, his chin is fucking gross. And yes, the pointy chin actually looks better believe it or not.

As for the clothes, what the fuck was wrong with them in the first place? You're screaming about sexualisation but any edits you made made them look inherently worse and more boring, which is death from a design standpoint.

And I'm sorry, but get over yourselves. It's an anime game, have you watched an anime? Almost every anime suffers from sameface, it's essentially part of the style at this point.
They're targeting weebs. Weebs want to see cute girls and don't give 2 fucks about sameface. YOU ARE NOT their target audience.

This is a waste of time on all of your parts. You should be ashamed to even consider yourselves artists if you waste time on this shit. You are all ngmi.

The picture you posted also has a gross face by the way, koala noses and eye bags are not cute.
If this was your example to show you guys are good then you haven't proven anything. None of you can draw or design.

>>3095734
Personal attack, mmm nice!..
Sure he is dork, but your edits are so awful that you needed to find most unappealing target to bully, while acting like you JUST HELPING HIM.

You are hypocritical cunts, and I hope you'll live lonely miserable lives.

>>3095734
>IT DOES NOT EXCUSE THE ART BEING GENERIC
Art does not owe you nothing.
Artists WILL be as generic as they please.

Go fuck yourselves.

>>3095734
>look at this garbage
>WE ARE JUST HELPING RESPECTIVELY!
Why did you put "respectively" in OP?

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>>3095734
Everyone shits on the creator and he is pretty scummy but sometimes I just feel sad for the dude, like in that picture he just seems like some guy who got screwed over by shitty genetics and ended up a loner for the rest of his life.
I hope he pieces together his life instead of riding off the coattails of Pewdiepie's audience or whatever.

>>3095734
>And for such an art and critiquing board, I have only gotten a few actual, legitimate and helpful criticisms out of most of the replies just being fucking assholes giving no insight to our work.

Of course you can't recognise critique when you can't even see what's wrong with the "fixes" you posted lol

I'm embarrassed for you

>>3095745
If he will become rich, all those kivisluts will line up to suck his dick.

But he will not.

What the actual fuck are you doing?
This shit is absolut disrespectful to the artist. He never asked for you to 'fix' (lol) anything. Of course it is easier for people who draw even worse than the original just to take the artwork and try to 'fix' (LOL) it by nitpicking and removing things with their shitty edits, instead of drawing something from scratch and fixing their own shit.

You remove anything which tells the viewer what characters they are, it is obvious these characters are designed to be sterotypes in anime (the nerd character, the sexy bimbo ect.). You take these and make them in an unreadable mess with a facestyle fitting right into tumblr. Just fucking stop and take a look at yourself. Make your own shit.

I am also laughing how you seem to have a problem with tits and hips, dont you have any female friends in real life? As far as I saw last time, the females I know and knew had hips and tits and some even really similar to the original art.

This shit belongs into trash.

Holy fucking shit. The one show did the edits should really go to /beg/. This thread raised my blood sugar on so many levels.

>>3095734
Original designs tell us what the characters are at first glance, yours do not. So yes yours are worse.
Artstyle looks at least anime. Yours is a mess.

>>3095745
It is admirable that he is making his game and what he wants, so he is already better than most people posting in this thread, espeically these who made the shit edits.

>>3095587
you lack the skill to redesign any of these. sorry senpai, but these all suck ass.

>>3095640


I really like how you changed the position of the crotch line on the pants. women have it high like that cuase they aint got no junk. Also having his leggs open more. Its almost as if the guy who drew the left image doesn't normaly draw men.

>>3095745
I think he's doing all right, he already made something he likes into reality.

>>3095760
And yet, he is still barely doing anything with the game itself. It has been years now and still never implemented the first rival, nor gotten rid of any "placeholders". Not to mention, we are actually doing something similar to YS

>>3095753
I do not see much of an issue of critiquing the original designs? The reason due to editing his art is to still keep the familarity of the original work but improving the designs as well. In other words, I use them as a "template". Not to mention, these drawings are more or less "official" for lack of a better word for the game and are public to the eye. As long as I am not claiming it as fully mine, I see no issue.

You mention on critiquing the work without permission, yet so many people here do the exact same towards other artists?

>>3095741
Thank you for the critique, I admit that the male was definitely not my best edit and I hope to improve this one. We do watch Anime and we love Anime, but just because it's an Anime game doesn't also mean it has to follow the same boring ideas over and over. It may be an Anime and "weeb" game, and I suppose it's fine to add some tropes to have familiarity towards Anime. However, doesn't mean all of it has to be there. And if it does, at the very least, not be so bland about it.

>>3095743
And we HAVE a right to critique just as you HAVE the right to critique our edits.

>>3095744
We are still interested in the game. We like the concept of Yandere Simulator, but we do not appreciate some of the cringeworthy things being made for it. Again, we understand women can be curvy, we understand that it's Anime, but that does not mean it has to be as boring and tasteless as this.

>>3095748
I have admitted to seeing some mistakes in the edits posted. I admit that on my part. However, I am also trying to give insight to others on my intention based on the things YandereDev himself said, but also, to give examples (even not-as good) on giving variety. That was all we meant.

>>3095766
You do not give ciritique, you shit over the original designs and try to force your viewpoint onto these designs (too sexualized, not unique enough) without considering for what these designs were actually made for.

>And yet, he is still barely doing anything with the game itself. It has been years now and still never implemented the first rival, nor gotten rid of any "placeholders". Not to mention, we are actually doing something similar to YS
Still way more than you ever did in your life, so there is that.

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>>3095753
Anon, people nowadays on kiwi farms are insecure tumblr white girls who pretend to be asian. The people who made these edits are not r9k regulars, they are cgl regulars .

>>3095734
>IT DOES NOT EXCUSE THE ART BEING GENERIC
that is what you call an opinion, and opinions are prone to be subjective.

>proper anatomy
Ahh yes anatomy, where the eyes take up half of the face and the nose is non existent. Proper anatomy.

>actual uniqueness
This is a game about anime tropes.

It fucking gets worse and worse.
Please don't ever draw again.

>>3095755
Understandable, thank you for your insight. I will improve on this and at the very least make the personalities readable. Dislike the choice of using noses if you wish, but it is used as an "example" of creating multiple faces.

>>3095760
Had to continue due to word count. Read the discussion for and about it here:
https://kiwifarms.net/threads/love-me.25464/

>>3095775
Just stop trying to 'improve' someone elses designs for a game which has nothing to do with you. Draw your own shit.

>>3095774
>It fucking gets worse and worse
How so?
It isn't like I do not understand the criticisms given to our reworks, but rather, most of the complaints seem to reply on vague replies such as this. Please tell me specifically what is getting worse. We would love critiques.

>>3095771
Kiwifarms is the pinnacle 9gag /r/the_donald tier reddit trash. Its attentionwhore sysop ran crying onto /g/ because apparently he got doxxed and lost out on some retarded jobs after he doxxed some pedo. And Evaxephon is once and always an attentionwhore. I bet he made this thread just to get free art for his shitty game.

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>>3095640

>>3095772
It is also an opinion that the game or designs do not need any form of constructive criticism at all. As I said before, nothing wrong with Anime tropes and using some of them for familiarity, but a whole other thing to have it implemented on both the characters and game to have it be tasteless. And yes, that can be considered another opinion as well.

People here say stylized art can still have proper anatomy, I don't see the issue with what I said.

>>3095783
>>3095783
They talk about this guy on lolcow/pull too, and over the years both sites have shifted in gender. Also how can you not tell op is a girl with how she types (cupcake9) Just look at the thread they linked from kiwi farm it's all women

>>3095766
>We do watch Anime and we love Anime, but just because it's an Anime game doesn't also mean it has to follow the same boring ideas over and over.

Except it absolutely can as it's his right to do so as an artist. This was his idea and creation, if he wanted to do it this way then that's what he will do. He is under no obligation to cater to your petty and nitpicky whims.

>I hope to improve this one
The problem is that you've shown you cannot draw, full stop. The only way to improve is to start drawing from scratch, you are a total beginner. It's obvious by your edits and the fact you can't even draw a chin.
If you're complaining that people aren't giving you in depth critique, the reason is that everything is terrible. This is why people are saying you're /beg/ tier, there is too much wrong for so many people to individually point out when everything is wrong.
"/beg tier" encompasses the critique of "everything is bad, start from scratch". You are getting critique.

>but also, to give examples (even not-as good) on giving variety. That was all we meant.

You are unable to do so with your poor skill level, you are not physically capable of portraying what diversity you want to others. How are you not getting this? Your criticisms cannot be taken seriously when your critique is worse than the original. You don't seem to understand this.

>>3095781
youre being vague about which criticism is vague

What I'm not geting here is how you hope to improve on the game when

1) the original artist in unaware of what you're doing
2) the original artist is likely to not approve of what you're doing
3) its his fucking game and you take no part in it

Even if your edits were better they're all worthless. Why are you wasting your time on this? improve your own shitty art.

LMFAO

he's better off stealing assets and hoping no one notices, this shit is embarrassing

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Ah, I noticed I missed one final edit. Sorry, everyone. And I know new posts have appeared, I will get to them shortly.

>>3095800
>lets ruin the face unnecessarily
>nitpick stuff that looks fine like the trousers and "fix" it with pillow shading

Everytime with you guys, huh?

>>3095734
Go back to your Kiwifarms circlejerk, maybe bully some more people rather than do something worthwhile with your time. Your pic related doesn't come across as creepy at all, just that he's insecure about his appearance. He just looks like an average guy.

Your edits are unappealing.

>>3095787
You're always saying how the characters look generic and tasteless, but from the redraws you've done, I don't see any improvement (except a few).

If you think desexualizing, changing the nose and eyebrows, and making them chunkier will give them more of a personality, then you're delusional.

These drawings are just your own interpretation of how the characters should look like to YOU, not an improvement. If you think the generic anime look bad, adding a tasteless TumblrTwist to the designs isn't improving anything.

>>3095800
This edit is kinda decent, as well as these >>3095587 >>3095610, but this anon >>3095807 is right about pillow shading. Also you changed his expression completely, I don't know what's more fitting to the character/situation. And that's literally it, all other edits are terrible.

>>3095791
You don't seem to understand that, regardless of the skill-level, the changes in the edits could be used as an example of what to improve. Even so, have you heard of the phrase, "You do not have to be a chef in order to say the food tastes bad"? It is an old but relevant example to what is being done here in this thread and also what I am trying to do as well.
I even see many "bad" artists on this board take art from artists that are of higher skill level than they are, calling it shit and criticizing. It is also an opinion that you feel I should quit drawing/that I cannot draw at all. Yes, I definitely understand that I am a beginner and I hope to improve a lot on my art as I draw more, I definitely agree.

>>3095807
The trousers with the very short top look very unbalanced. The face does not fit with the rest of the body, either. If at all. And the artist has very flat textures and strange shade-placing

>>3095797
Many people I have seen, come to /ic/ and criticize artists especially popular ones like Sakimichan (there is even a thread about her open right now). YanDev constantly seeks for volunteers for art as well, we could easily show the creator of these works, AND the creator of the game ourselves. And show our own works.

>>3095594
Everything is reddit-tier to you people.

>>3095818
>You do not have to be a chef in order to say the food tastes bad
Also I guess you do not have to be a chef to take tomatoes out of a dish and replace them with overcooked fish, eh?

>>3095798
What?
Just because you feel our efforts in editing and our skill level are bad to you, you think YanDev stealing things from other hardworking 3D modelers are "better off"? That is as petty as the other anon claimed I was being. wtf

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I apologize, there is another edit I have forgotten as well. But it was not made by me

>>3095818
>You do not have to be a chef in order to say the food tastes bad"
You need to be a chef or someone very knowledgeable in that field to tell the other chef why its bad and for what exact reason, understand what the chef wanted to do with his dish and give based on that feedback. Not some retarded who never touched cooking in his life saying its bad and spawing random nonsense because he is even worse at cooking that the chef himself.
gg no re

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But also, please compare the Designdoll model to the artist. You will see the obvious mistakes in perspective, proportion and anatomy.

>>3095827
It's literally your edit with another hairstyle and glasses. Although good job on turning an instantly recognizable beta boy into a generic guy.

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>>3095829

>>3095828
Yes, completely disregard the fact that many anons on /ic/ who are of lower skill level, shit on many people with higher skil levels than they are. Same for doing so without their knowledge, or permission to do so to their works.

I am curious though regarding you Anon/s, about your own skill level/s. Could you please show a few examples of your artworks? I am not asking in the meme "post your work", rather, I'd genuinely like to see your own artworks.

>>3095829
That is not the same pose and a different camera angle. Yes, there are problems with the waist there, the ass is twisted towards the viewer too much, but it's not stretched out like that. Also, the legs are not in that position.

>>3095818
>You don't seem to understand that, regardless of the skill-level, the changes in the edits could be used as an example of what to improve.
Ah, so now we're getting defensive.
Once again, you are portraying your criticism through a visual media. You are not good at drawing, this is an objective fact. As a result your criticisms physically cannot portray the "improvements" you feel are necessary as they are not improved from the original image to the eyes of others. And yet you still think your edits are better when they /do/ look genuinely worse.
This is why everyone is being so harsh on you. You are insisting your edits are better when infact everyone can see they are not. And then, because you can't see how bad they look, you get personally offended and defensive when people point this out.
If everyone is disagreeing with you, then maybe you should listen to what's being said.

>It is also an opinion that you feel I should quit drawing/that I cannot draw at all
Way to victimise yourself. When the fuck did I say to stop drawing? I said to start from scratch, and it's the best critique you're ever going to hear at this point in your skill level.
And yes, I'm right. You can't draw. You are bad at drawing. That's not opinion, that's fact.

>The trousers with the very short top look very unbalanced. The face does not fit with the rest of the body, either. If at all. And the artist has very flat textures and strange shade-placing

It doesn't look unbalanced, it looks fine desu.
How does it not? It's the style of the game, it fits in perfectly with the other characters.
I'm kind of laughing how you're talking about flat textures and "strange shade-placing" when the solution is to pillow shade lol.
And that's exactly what I meant before. The fact is that the original image, while not intricate, displays knowledge somewhat of shading. Your artist displayed 0. Your poor knowledge on this subject and your skill reflects that.

>>3095838
Do you have eyes? Browse the fucking board and you'll be able to see the caliber of work being posted here. It's the same people you dingus.

>>3095838
>Yes, completely disregard the fact that many anons on /ic/ who are of lower skill level, shit on many people with higher skil levels than they are. Same for doing so without their knowledge, or permission to do so to their works
You mean like Sakimichan? We don't edit her work. It's fine to give critique, but you seem to actually think you're improving something. You don't just critisize bad art, you also nitpick stylistic choices AND you edit art and make it look worse.

>>3095832
>>3095829
if you cut her legs out of the picture, you can see that the picture is at an angle slightly looking down at her

>>3095818
Maybe try studying lolcow threads before you become one yourself?

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>>3095838
Just check out any thread, the people who post in other threads also post here.
If you wanted to help the original artist you would have asked them and linked them to your thread and discussed it with him. What you are doing is just stroking your ego.

>>3095838
Anons who nitpick and do worse than Sakimi with their edits get shit on as well. Don't think you're some special case and that you're getting shit on for no reason.

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>>3095778
Those bitches someday soon will 'improve' you in some of their reeducation camps.

>>3095858
No. Not the tolerance camp. Pls no.

>>3095784
rofl

>>3095829
>>3095832
That's not even the same angle at all.
No wonder you can't draw, you can't even pose a 3D model correctly.

>>3095587
most of these changes arent necessarily better, some of them are objectively worse

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>>3095859
Im afraid its only way you'll stop sexualizing oposite sex.

>>3095601
you don't know what tumblr nose means

Maybe hentai fucked me up, but these complaints over "big tits and hips" are complaints over average-sized and not unrealistic at all.

>>3095907
Most of the characters have avarange tits and hips, like I already mentioned most of the girls and women I know in real life have similar sizes. Even when they were 15+.
I will never understand the problem with tits and hips some people have.

>>3095907
>>3095627

>>3095912
The only one with too big tits. Wow.

>>3095907
>>3095909
As a le gril xD with big tits, it's fucking annoying to see these people complain about oversexualization if a character has a large chest or hips/ass. As you said, some people are born this way. I was a B cup when I was 11/12 and a D cup by 14. It's not even uncommon, I have many friends with large tits.
Plus, who doesn't like looking at/drawing voluptuous boobs and shapely women? They appeal to a large demographic for a reason, they are visually appealing to most people.

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>>3095913
>>3095912
>>3095627
Some women have even bigger tits.
I find it unatractive, yet in teal world picrelated not even close to maximum size.

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>>3095917
>teal world
I mean real world, but fuck it.

>>3095700
fucken saved

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>>3095917
>>3095916
also I want to use this oportunity to apologise to this girl:
>who doesn't like looking at/drawing?..
I dont like cause I am secretly gay.

Stay sexy.

>>3095593
>It's either boobs or the muscle, you can't have both

Is this person a fucking retard? I have seen plenty of tones girls with big tits as well. Those aren't even big tits enough to make a complaint on it anyway. And why compeltely get rid of her muscle definition?

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>>3095734
> complains about generic art
> "fix" it by making the characters 10 times more bland and unappealing

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>>3095932
>Is this person a fucking retard?
Did you even read the thread?

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>>3095593

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>>3095935
>> complains about generic art
>> "fix" it by KILLING GENETICALLY INFERIOR MAN

Fix this OP:
>>3095937

>>3095932
She is chubby shortstack with virtually zero tits. Thefore triggered reaction about athletic girls with boobs.

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Why are you people still commenting and insulting our hard efforts on trying to improve the work/s?
The thread is over, I acknowledge I made a mistake in posting the original artists' work and edited some things I shouldn't have.

>>3095845
I apologize, I did not intend to come off as defensive. And I was referring to the other anon/s telling meto "quit art". I acknowledge my art skills are not on par, nor am I trying to claim it is. I feel the art with the gi looks unbalanced due to the torso area being incredibly short.

But anyway, thanks for the critiques, everyone.

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>>3095949
>hard efforts
LOL!!!!!!

>>3095937
she doesn't have much boob-age though, and she's fat

>>3095593
>It's either boobs or muscle
>takes away both
This isn't the worst piece of shit in this thread, but it is the most disappointing.

>replaces shit anime with even shittier tumblr art
this should not exist

>>3095959
Gotta make them less bland by removing both the muscles and sexiness amiright.

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I really hate YandereDev and its shitty community, get the fuck out of this board.

>>3095962
Only girls are alowed to draw girls, not some creeps! Mmmkay?

>whines about eyebrows for some of the edits
>actually thinks those thick replacement eyebrows are an "improvement"
LEL why do you keep fucking getting rid of pointed chins for and adding caterpillar eyebrows?

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>>3095962
Let's just take out any interesting features that differentiate them and give us visual cues to their personality. There, now they don't look so generic.

>>3095949
People did not tell you to quit art. They told you to quit making shitty edits and draw your own shit.

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>>3095964
So he is amateur, what next?
We should prevent him from working?
With such reasoning we should confiscate drawing tools from kiwi-retartds.

>>3095964
I dont give a fuck about him, his game or the community around it. What made me angry were the shitty edits done to someone elses art, when the person who does the edits cant even do better.

>>3095973
>draw your own shit.
Whoa! Easy here!
You might do some permament brain damage to the OP by such bold and radical concep as original work.

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>>3095958
>and she's fat
Cause, again, you can be athletic and have body fat. Here is a musclegirl with low body fat and big boobs though. This is also possible, as fat distribution is not uniform.

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>atrocious art by kjeck
>my fucking face

had OP (cupcake9) not have a big fucking mouth and an inflated ego, she and the contributors wouldve saved herself the embarrassment

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>>3095964
>brings this awful game and SHIT EDITS on the bord.
>cries to get rid of the game from the board.
>after introducing the game to the board in first place.

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>>3095992
>cupcake9
Lardy Fatso confirmed.

>>3095998
literally worse than freud

>>3095998
These are not bad studies, I dont want to bully the person for the 'original' art they do. At least they seem to have understand that this thread was a fucking shit idea.

>>3095916
show??? unless ur a ham beast.

>>3095989
padded bra

>>3096001
>>3096000
Image is unrelated to the thread, I just wanted to put some normal art into thread.
Comment was about name not image.

>>3095597
Out of all of these, this is probably the only one I like and even this one I still consider a bit shit due to the face and lack of antenna. Maybe it's because it's basicaly the same otherwise

I don't really understand the issue with the tiny thigh tho? it looks pretty thick to me and it seems you thought so too from making it thinner in the edit.

>>3096004
I better look at her art.

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>>3096005
Have this one then.

>>3095587
i dont like either but i can tell the redraw somehow has even less dignity

congrats

>>3096010
Not only this but why say the outfit doesnt suit her? from what i can tell from her demeanor, it must certainly does. and its just a basix outfit to begin with, what about it is unfitting?

>>3096013
ok, u win

>>3095949
>The thread is over
You don't get to decide that
Is this your first time on 4chan?

>And I was referring to the other anon/s telling meto "quit art"
I don't see 1 post ITT saying this.

>I acknowledge my art skills are not on par, nor am I trying to claim it is.
By applying your skills on top of this art (which made it look worse in almost every instance), you were broadcasting that you had improved upon it, which meant you did think your version was better.
There really isn't any other way to interpret that, which is what set so many anon's off.

>I feel the art with the gi looks unbalanced due to the torso area being incredibly short.
The shirt itself is kind of short, but the torso proportions are actually fine.
In his version, the belt is tied at the waist. In yours, it's tied at his hips. That's really the only difference (and obviously the shirt is longer and lacking shading).

If you are serious about improving, take this thread on board and really listen. This attitude won't get you anywhere, focus on your own skill before being so judgemental of others. You need more knowledge and experience before your criticisms can be taken more seriously like this.
If you really hate this guy then take it as a personal challenge to better yourself and exceed him, not tear him down. You won't get anywhere doing that.

>>3096004
soz anon they're for my studies only xoxo

>>3095587

The edits look worse as they desexualize the characters while removing the eastern influence of the source material.

You conflate objective art fundamentals with "design choice", and your design choices miss the mark.

This thread is an embarrassment. with very few exceptions, the edits are not good or significant enough to be necessary. The original artist is not particularly good, but the editors are petty losers and shit artists besides. Gas yourselves lmao

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>>3096013
Why you posted edited version?

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>>3096027
forgot to resize

>>3096027
jej

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I tried to look for his deviantart and I gotta say OP: why are you picking on him for? he's not bad at all. some flaws, but still certainly way above your level.

removing the antennae is not an objective improvement

all of your edits shoe a shallow understanding of character design. it seems like you do anything according to your own will but gloss it up as fixing mistakes.

this wasnt a design exercise, that much can be seen by everyone here. i don't need to waste time calling out what this REALLY is, and what kiwifarms is about. but i wanted to emphasize that this is NOT DESIGN.

>>3096035
Look at picture you posted if you need an ansver.
Some sexist pigs salivate over strong independent female.

Is this kind of artist you want to stand beside?

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>>3096035
>calls his art shit
>still way better than you are

poor cuckcake

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>>3096041
might as well edit these too. maybe add in edits like antenna and tits too

>>3096035
>misshappen boar
Kek

>>3096041
Even Nosebro draws better than this.

>>3096048
These artworks are still not shit. Medicore maybe.

>>3095613
>I don't know how to touch dirt without getting my cloths dirty therefore nobody can

>>3096035
its good for /beg/, bad for /draw/

>>3096048
false. nosebro doesnt even finish anything so there is nothing to compare. the art in question has vision. nosebro has no vision. he does some aesthetic sketches and calls it a day.

>>3095613
>broken knees
>i can do this exact pose

i never understood this criticism regarding legs

>>3095593
is this a boy?

I'm surprised no one made replies in the thread regarding the KF thread itself for "fixing shit art". It's hilarious

>ok cupcake what the fuck? you're making these people look like real actual humans instead of deformed hentai monsters. yandev works so hard on these designs you kiwi

>Still better than the source material.

>But that argument kinda leads to "It's just my artstyle!!" to justify bad anatomy, fetishes and same face syndrome, which are basically what I always try to fix on my edits. Kjech actually KNOWS how to draw good art with no sexualization or crappy ecchi vibes, and that's why the edits are so important imo. It shows that kjech could make the art truly good if Eva didn't ask him to make all the characters be hentai waifus or plain John Does all the time.

>There seems to have this misconception that anime=cute sameface, when in reality anime is made of many and many diferent styles and trends that can change just like cartoon art. Eva is one of the people who thinks that all anime are made of moeblob waifus and the same face and body for everyone in a colored background. I mean, many times he turned down Druelbozo's offerings to model a new base mesh for YanSim because he didn't consider it "anime enough".

Long story short, he makes his characters like SAO ones while ignoring the existence of animes/mangas like Ergo Proxy, Berserk and even Mob Psycho 100.

You made it so fucking obvious it was you posting in here, too. You'd say the same shit over there as you did here regarding the stylization. This was a great thread

>>3095587
I like the first one better. Second one looks like it was drawn by somebody with no attraction to women

>>3096051
There are two regular artists on /beg/ who will be better than this artist in a few weeks. This artwork is really lacking form and looks stiff due to the lack of curvature. The most difficult thing to draw in this image for /beg/ is the basin. If you look at all the images, this artist is very weak at hands and the poses look very stiff. Weak pose, weak shading, weak colour. For manga, these three are essential for a good image.

The colour choices are uninspired. It's why I mock the OP for attempting to redraw parts of it, the entire god damn image needs to be overhauled because it is legitimately shit art.

The lining is also very western and thick and the eyes and faces don't have the right anatomy. The line drawings hide his inability to shade. Black and white hides his ability to colour. This guy needs more loomis. It would take the average /beg/ 1.5 years to get to this level from absolutely 0 artistic ability.

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>>3096061
It is now.

>>3096076
Top fucking kek

And OP, I'd like to see you draw more of your own art. I wasted two years of my life editing shit. Remember, photo studies, master studies and refer to loomis where necessary. Master studies from artists that aren't shit tier are important. Pick classical painters or people like Krenz, etc. Never do work for free unless you get something out of it.

>>3095593
The left looks male and the hands are deformed.

>>3096076
Wait a minue, is this the same dick used for a Kado edit?

>>3096084
hownew.ru

>>3096053
Lmao get the fuck off /ic/ anon. Have you seen the draw threads? It's just dipshits who think they are too good for /beg/ threads.

>>3096091
DELET THIS IMMEDIATELY

>>3095605
What you are doing is restricting depicted sexuality like the old catholic church. Very progressive.

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Can you guys try to purify REIQ's work?

>>3095605
>It would not only help us, but Yandere Simulator as well!
Why would anyone want to help Yanderedev? He and his game are pieces of shit
Anyway. >>3095588 Completely loses her personality
Nither >>3095589 or >>3095590 have any appeal to their design beyond the curves. Sure their designs are just low-level pandering, but it means that if you get rid of their tits and hips like this they just look like generic mother characters.
These redesigns are only better in a technical aspect, you're stripping them completely of their physical appeal.
On the other hand >>3095613 >>3095633 and >>3095665 are better in every way, because unlike the others their designs are actually being hindered by the over-sexualization.

>>3096167
>are better in every way

Plant girl became a fatty for no reason. Her "fixed" legs are an abomination, and removing the sexy strand of hair is an heresy, fucker has no idea what an appealing design is. Only the part about the dirt is fair.

>>3096173
It's just about making images less sexy and disguising it as 'improving designs'.

>>3095627
>Both the shorts and breasts were changed due to the over-sexualization of the characters. And it does not help that they are underaged school girls. Unnecessary and no need to sexualize everything about these girls.

I fucking hate western weebs. Fake ass motherfuckers, that don't even get the culture. Trying to change things because they think things are too "problematic." Thank god Japs don't give a single fuck.

But in the end, I don't really care, since Yandere Simulator was already westernized in the first place.

>>3095633

>the chocolate looks more like brown cum
>let's make it look like shit instead

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I think this pretty much applies to this thread as well.

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>>3096068
jesus christ, the first post actually ass kissing these horrible edits
>real actual humans
>these are fucking anime characters

>>3096068
I came into this thread prepared to rip into Yandere Simulator's artstyle. But no, the redesigns are mostly worse. It doesn't matter if they're more technically sound if all appeal is completely lost.

>>3095734
I don't find this guy unatractive. I'm certainly more uglier than him and i still women want to talk with me. He just needs to be fit as fuck.

Is a shame i'm so autistic i can even say hi to a girl.

>>3096250
Maybe you have an ugly high test face, like a brute.

High test faces will always be more attractive to women, even if it isn't handsome. I think most of that kid's problem with hsi face is his weak jaw.

While some points are valid, the critic mostly just complains about stylization, exaggeration, and character design. It's kind of annoying to see this person say "unnecessary" to small details that really are neither necessary / unnecessary, but rather a result of choice. Most problems I see are just stiff and awkward figures.

>>3095949
>dumb tumblr cunt "fixes" someone's drawings, posts it in here, makes fun of the game developer, all this while trying to sound intelligent and morally higher
This is what I call a good thread

Isn't Yandere simulator a hentai game? What's the point of de-sexualizing characters from a fucking hentai game?

>>3095589
>Unnecessarily big boobs and hips
What are you, gay ?

>Those disgusting chicken-scratched lines
Just stop dude, learn before you try and teach.

Who made this bullshit thread. Inexperienced assholes really piss me off with this is better than you bullshit. Totally unnecessary fucking hate artists sometimes

>>3095587
This is by far the worst set of edits I've ever seen.
Not that the originals are good or anything, but you clearly didn't even bother to understand why the designs are the way they are. I assume you were just too busy catholic-churching them. The fact that what you consider pertinent criticism can be simplified to "MAKE EM UGLIER" really highlights the kind of tumblr ham planets you probably are.

You suck at art and at design. Get the fuck out.

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>>3095593
>women only develop breasts if they're overweight

>>3096257
I think he looks way more younger than he really is. And that's kind of a turn off for more younger women (but old women like that feature)

>>3096038
>i don't need to waste time calling out what this REALLY is, and what kiwifarms is about.
What, that kiwifags are the lowest of the low, scum that resorts to bullying social retards, mentally disabled people and literal autists to feel better about their miserable existence?

OP probably thought we'd join in on the fun and trash some lolcow gamecreators art, because this is the epic hackerforum 4chan that's visited by cool kids just like they are. Well, a lot of anons simply visit /ic/ to improve at art together. Sure, there's always a few artist celebrity threads, but generally the responses are pretty mixed. Long-term organized bullying is more of a social media thing than an imageboard phenomenon.

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>>3095593
>women only develop breasts if they're overweight

>>3096070
I agree with what you said but I would still not call this guys art shit, he finishes his work, he draws a lot and it looks alright. Not good art but also not shit. This person will probably get better in the future.

you are fucking pathetic OP. fuck off back to where you came from

apparently, this is what "OP" (cupcake) was talking about. Kiwi farms copy of yanderesim

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=x1ODg8KZonY&time_continue=40

Looks like shit

>>3096430
So they complain about yanderedev stealing... and yet they just rip his game idea?

>>3096430
The official art for Love Me is worse than anything kjech's ever done for Yandere Simulator, to be honest.

>>3095587
so, i guess you are female right? Let me tell you something: boys like BIG BOOBS, and HIPS, HUGE HIPS, HUGE ASS, THICCNESS, with slim waist, slim neck, slim arms and a cute face, almost cat face, Get Over It! You dont understand style, your changes cut off the appeal of the drawings, in the face and in the body. You put your frustations with your body in these changes, trying to make them more "realistic", but the purpose of them is ESCAPISM, the Game deals with HORNY TEENS and is ITS TARGET, even though is not impossible for some girls have HUGE boobs and being slim, as my gf has, or a AMAZING BODY that you probably dont have, dumb bitch. Now get out and go cry about how your tits are almost NULL.

>>3095734

>You guys seriously think and feel the original designs are much better than our redraws

Given the context, yes.
Also 10/10 for exploring the salt mine that is /ic/

>>3095949
Nigga, where do you think you are? Next time read the fucking sticky.

Almost all of the originals are nicer to me. I can understand the critique but it's obviously stylized and the characters are exaggerated to differentiate them from each other.

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i found it intresting even tho i prefer the orignal art for obvious reasons

>>3095734
Bet the ladies are flocking to him now though! $$$$!!!!

>>3095595
New face is not only HORRID, he also got rid of the tilt in her head. He god rid of the belly button but left a fucking stain there. He doesn't know how clothes work and thinks all shadow cast perfect forms exactly the same shape as their object. This guy is literally /beg/, and isn't even half decent with photoshop. Her hair is all stained now. Fuck me, don't touch shit if you are fucking colorblind.

>>3095600
you killed her expression, added an awful nose that does NOT fit anime, made her eyes super generic, added horrible yeti eyebrows, forgot to complete her jaw like a careless retard, cut off a quart of her ear, an added a dick in between her legs

Kiwifarmers are autistic fucking losers and this thread is evidence.

>>3095734
HaHAA wow. You're legit posting his face and calling him ugly? And apparently he's a pedophile? Where did that come from? How about you post your stinking mug and try to compare yours to his on a point by point basis?

Your edits are garbage. They are in no way more "unique" than the originals, and if anything you just cut away defining features from the designs that you arbitrarily deem "unrealistic". The whole point of the game is to be cheesy, pandering smut. Did you not get that? Are you... retarded?

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I am late to the party, but what the hell is going on lol? all these edits are horrendous and you killed almost every little quality of the originals.
and then you resort to doxx and shit on the artist?
and who the fuck are kiwifarmers?

>>3096430
the fuck?
they felt the need to make a shitty in terms of skill and shitty in terms of quality rip off of yandere sim but with tumblr art instead of anime? what are these people.

>>3096776
>and who the fuck are kiwifarmers?
It's the site where every autist online gathers to rave on about their favorite lolcows. The website itself should really be classified as its own super-organism of a lolcow

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>>3095587
All of the edits look worse. All of the people editing are worse than the original artist. It is amazing that you can be on a moral high horse when your arguments are basically
>MUH STYLE
>NO, MUH STYLE
And then generally adding more technical mistakes across the board.

>>3096784
I looked it over. are they basically just focusing on doxxing people?

>>3096808
I couldn't tell you since I avoid going near it. But their attention seems focused mostly on harassing and documenting the lives of infamous e-celebs.

>>3095605
>If you feel it is not on par with your standards on how you perceive to be good edits, then please, give us constructive criticism.

No.

>>3095587
>"Fixing" weeb art
>For a weeb game
>Turn it into shit
Good job faggots.

This is by far the worst thread i have seen on /ic/ in a long time

in almost every case the edits are far worse than the original

kys

>>3096584
>this is the state of reddit /pol/cucks
wew I am so UNIRONICALLY posting in ALL CAPS like a POO in the LOO

>>3095587
>kiwifarms redraws

I've seen the threads. You guys can't draw either but asspat each other for "fixing" bad art. The cows truly do come home at kiwifarms.

To much nitpick to take these edits seriously.

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>>3096430
>check the Tumblr of this "improvement of YanSim"
>check the kiwithread on "fixing alex's shitty art"
>see this posted


HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH the art, bland designs, everything just looks so fucking terrible. quit while you're ahead

>>3095587
>>3095588
>>3095589
>>3095590
>>3095591
>>3095593
>>3095595
>>3095597
>>3095600
>>3095605
Every single one of these edits, and every single one below the ones I quoted, are strict downgrades in both ability and style; some of the edits just make the characters plain unattractive and plain for no reason.
You have some sort of brain malfunction going on if you can honestly defend a single one of these edits.

>>3096901
What the shit? This looks disgusting. I'd take the OP art over this

This is one of the most disgusting threads I've seen on /ic/ and I'm here for some years...

All the edits are really shit and obviously made by jealous bad artists. And the reasons behind the edits are reaaaally cringy.

I hope to never get the attention of such an autistic group of people.

>>3096882
so you are a cynical tumbrl girl with hairy armpits, arent you? aw? Let me guess, do you think you are funny too aw? sarcastic? Oh, no, they are portraying women wrong, im not that sexy, BUT, BUT, i wanna to men desire me too, im so insecure about my body, i dont like this, i have to downgrade all these bodies in these fucking Stylized drawings to make me fell better about myself, aw? Get out you piece of Shit. Go cry with another ugly woman in tumbrl about how men dont desire your fat face. You did all this just for you, dont you? You are disgusting.

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>>3095587
oh no op, they are like 3.29 kg, so heavy, what you gonna do? do you want erase me to make you feel better about your unappealing body? But what about me and the people who like me, the people who jerk off to me, this make you feel this bad? Dont worry op, come here, you can touch them with you want, just imagine having this, now suck me, yes op, suck me, dont cry, dont cry, oh, you are crying like a little bitch who you are, now be a good girl and lick me.

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>>3095587
what you gonna do op?

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you can use photoshop in yourself.

>>3096996
>>3097005
>>3097012
This isn't making you look good, fuck off. OP is a Tubbymblrite we know, but this is pathetic too, stop getting triggered.

>>3096584
You type like a retard.

>>3096167
The game seems sexual so I have no idea whats wrong with sexualization. If I wanted to jerk off to regular looking girls I'd watch regular porn instead of play this game, you know what I mean? If the appeal of the game is the pretty yandere girls then make them pretty and not plane.

>>3096068
But the reason for this edit >>3095593
is completely false. You can have b to c cups and still look like that.

>>3095627
Why make the breasts smaller on everyone? Do you not have any?

>>3095680
>These designs like variety!
>Let me make them duller
Okay. Also style does excuse all those things. That's why you get shit like anime.

>>3095692
>Over-sexualitzation
Literally opinion based. To some people any sexualization is over sexualization.

>>3095964
holy shit, its not even that he didnt use his switch, its that he's using custom strings for every fucking command.

>>3097084
Yeah, I was just trying to look at the designs objectively. If you're going to pander you might as well go all the way.

>>3095588
No girl would wear the shorts on the right, those are grandma shorts.

>>3095587
this is literally the only good edit.

I mean yandere simulator and thus, all the characters, are basically anime tropes so i think the original art suits it better than the edits. This first one is the only good one but i'd still give her a couple scars since delinquents in Japan (especially if they're being based off yankees or something, idk if this character is) are basically baby-Yakuza so yeah, they probably have some scars.

>>3095593
Has this person never seen an athletic woman? Unless you're on steroids and thus macho-lady, you can have boobs and muscle. Whoever did this edit has never touched a boob.

>>3095593
i think its so cute that she has a swimming tan and a long jump uniform :)

>>3097279
>those are grandma shorts.
where the fuck do you live? jean shorts are a young adult thing.

>>3095619
the pants were fine, bitch . you gave tErrible eyes as well.

>>3095605
Just stop thinking more boring = better.
What is your fixation with the antenna thing? It's clearly a cartoon, so not everything has to be functional.
Also, why do you hate the female body? You hate boobs, you hate wide hips, you hate women that look sexy because of their feminine bodies. Let these cartoon characters be sexy if their designer wanted them to be that way.
Just stop being such prudes already.

You're just making the designs more bland, less interesting, and more "cosplayable", and it makes the characters look completely forgettable.
Also, your comments are autistic as fuck.

>>3095633
have you ever even seen cum? it looks nothing like what you apparently think it looks like

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>>3096989
>I am a fucking retard
Good to know that you really are a pajeet that poos on the street.

>>3096776
sauce? doesn't she have a tumblr blog or something?

go to hell eva

If you're such a better artist, stop editing other people's work and draw a better character from scratch.

You're just as bad as a Sonic artist on DeviantArt

>>3095597
Stop shoehorning them into the same character archetype. You're making them look boring.

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Reminder that this is also from the kiwifarms redesign thread lel

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>>3097505
where'd you go OP? gonna show us more of these great artworks like pic related?

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>>3095613
>dinosaur knees

>>3095587

These attempts at fixing the art are terrible for two reasons. As illustration fixes they don't really address any of the fundamental problems with the work and instead focus on what the person is seeing as design issues. And as design changes the person couldn't be more wrong because she's "fixing" it to her personal tastes and sensibilities with no regard to what's the purpose of the design. This is some pseudo fetish game, it's characters being overly sexual isn't even just expected, it's what they should be doing.

>>3097544
Who told you the artist is a she? You'd have to read the thread to know it, so you also should know that you aren't saying anything new, and your contribution is meaningless, you're just bumping a thread that nobosy's intrested in anymore.

>>3097580
Me posting on the thread is nothing but self gratification, similar to what you're doing right now, except the gap between my post and the previous one is far smaller than yours and mine.
If you acted by your belief of avoiding meaningless conversation you would have posted nothing. This is a slow board, the chances I just posted and walked away satisfied are quite high. Even if I stuck around the only thing to gain would be a meta conversation such as this one. If minimizing meaningless post was the actual purpose then posting nothing at all would have made more sense since you would guarantee there'd be no further replies from me.
Your behavior is full of self serving hypocrisy and I am not even sure if you actually believe your words or if you got yourself rused. I would say some moments of introspection are in order. Not that you'd engage on them.

>>3095587
I'm 90% certain this was posted by either a cow or some estranged kiwi trying to get some autistic form of payback. Some of the content is funny but kiwi farms is discord levels of autism and drama

>>3097584
You are fucking awesome!
We need more straight shooters like you here.

>>3097580
>you're just bumping a thread that nobosy's intrested in anymore.

I fucking am, this thread is hilarious

>>3095587
>>3097544
This thread is good for a laugh, but in all honesty what OP is doing isn't much different from most redlines in the general threads. A little change here, a trivial change there, no reason other than the redliner prefers it, or for the sake of busywork, rather than redrawing from the ground up and showing how a good initial process can avoid problems down the road.

>>3097580
>Who told you the artist is a she?
it's either a woman or a man so castrated he might as well be one

>>3095610
>short skirt
>high stockings
>SKINDENTATIONS
and he just
FUCKING TAKES IT ALL AWAY

WHO IS THIS BOZO

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>>3095714
>The skill of the WAY it's drawn is irrelevant, we are asking for a critique over the designs. The clothes.
Skill is relevant, because you lack the skill to effectively execute a design.

That said most of these don't change the design much and come off as personal preference rather than actual design criticism. Like >>3095589
"Unnecessarily big boobs and hips" isn't criticism, it's personal preference. Flattening multiple characters like this results in less distinctive silhouettes and unique body types and makes the designs on the whole worse.
>>3095593
"It's either boobs or muscle, you can't have both"
Things like this make these things sound amateurish, because A. you can, pic related, and 2. It's a fiction and doesn't need to follow reality exactly.

I can't be bothered to go through all of these but they are generally worse and don't represent good criticism, because they are universally worse designs with worse executions.

literally tumblr redraws
kys OP

>>3095600
Honestly one of the ugliest ones and those eyebrows holy shit LUL

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as shit as yandere simulator is, these edits are absolutely horrendous and whoever did them should feel bad and doesnt understand that character designs for shitty anime games aren't entirely based in reality.

They look boring as shit. Just like those whiney tumblrtards that draw over revealing anime girl armor in the name of feminism. This is no different. I'm glad /ic/ can agree on something for once and its that these are all fucking shit.

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>comes here to shit on an artist while dumping bad edits in the hopes we'll also mock and bully them
>"why can't /ic/ just leave these editors alone :'("

holy shit lol

https://kiwifarms.net/threads/fix-alexs-shit-designs.31778/page-3

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>>3098709
>Boobs would get in the way of an athlete while they're competing so it makes sense not to have them.

Hmm, you're right, I guess any athletic girls with boobs should just get rid of them since we know how much we want this "realistic" logic to fit in to the real world.
It just makes sense not to have them.

>but with the hair cut she has now it just makes sense to get rid of them, at least design-wise.

It's either hairstyle or boobs, you can't have both.
You all have proven you know nothing about designs, your shitty edits prove this. Please stop talking, you all can't even draw nor design for shit.

>>3098709
>light theme
LMAO

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>>3098711
>there's some exceptional weeb-tastic anons there for sure

This is a varied board with many styles. Us pointing out that a weeb style is good for pandering to a weeb audience and fits the aesthetic just fine apparently makes us all weebs. Well, whatever helps you to convince yourself to disregard any critique (which is hilarious considering these "edits" were critiques the original creator should take on, according to you guys. The irony.).

This is why you know nothing about design, you can't even come to this conclusion on your own.

You're all speaking from the viewpoint of people who are biased since you don't like yandere simulator. This is why you are so nitpicky and unnecessarily critical for the stupidest things.
We are all unbiased and speaking from the position of artists who have experience and an eye for art/design, we couldn't give 2 fucks about this guy, just the work.

>But hey, everyone has their own tastes and /ic/ is no exception.

Critique is not taste. Your edits removing shit like "antenna" = your taste, which is why people got irritated when you tried to pass off projecting your personal preference as criticism.
Us telling you why your edits are objectively worse and unappealing is fact, not opinion, not taste.

I would say that almost nobody in the thread likes the OG art, it's very amateur and western weeb.
But did your "fixes" improve on it? No way in hell, they all look worse objectively.
Don't act like we are biased and you are not.

>>3098719
>implying I'm a member of this forum

wouldn't waste my time

>>3098723
>being THIS MAD

>>3098727
>>3098719
Kiwifarms plz go and stay go

>>3098711
>>3098723
It's great to see that they learned absolutely nothing from this thread, then.

>>3098709
>bring your art to a place renowned for harsh critique and unyielding honestly
>"Boo hoo they didn't like my crappy edits!"
The fuck did you expect was gonna happen? If y'all are looking for asspats you came to the wrong place.

>>3098709
>>3098711
>>3098727
>>3098719
>>3095734
Holy fuck I regularly surf kiwifarms and I had no idea they were such hypocritical and stupid cunts

They literally laugh at people all day and then can't handle being laughed at without chimping out, holy shit

>tfw never realised that you're probably all women and girls

Fucking hell. It would explain the constant desire for drama.

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>>3098709
>>3098711
>>3098723
This is pathetic. From BOTH sides, yes you. You gave yourself away that YOU go to that Reddit tier forum site, Jesus Christ. I figured OP had to of came from something with this hugbox shittiery, but taking screens means you are the same bunch of fags that just starts shit for drama sake. You are all girls, clearly from this.

If only shit threads like this gets pruned, instead of it only getting a blip on the radar if it happens to mention Shadman or Kron or some shit. This place needs a revision so redditard tier fuckers can stop pouring their drama shit from their site to this one.

>>3095587
>Redesign characters from fetish game
>Make them not fetish like

...For what purpose? It feels silly.

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One of the best threads I have seen for a long while on /ic/, kek. That's what you get for making such shit edits like these, lacking sense of creativity AND art skill. Fuck off you fat ugly flatchested girls.

fucking lel