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pretty good gesture, nice clean readable silhouette, you'd do p good at storyboarding for cartoons

her left arm looks to be in front of her face
plates look like they are angled inwards
one plate is a cylinder while the other is smoothed
knees should be above feet. her right knee in particular makes it look like her knees are buckling together
looks like she is falling to her right because of this

>>3086158
it's shit