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sketch from imagination.I'll eventually get reference and start cleaning it up.
Not really looking for a critic anatomy wise,but more on the feel/narrative/composition of the the thing

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Study with some imagined elements

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I'm not sure about Geralt size... Which one looks better?

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>>3084653
Here is the smaller Geralt version, which I think looks more intimidating.

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tips?

>>3084656
Sweet!

>>3084621
He's wearing plate armor AND using a human shield, quite clever of him, better safe than sorry.

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>>3084664
Heads don't look like that. Back of the skull should extend back further.

>>3084656
I definitely like the second one more. Makes the beast look so much more monumental.

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>>3084697
hehehe ;)

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>>3084622
Your edges are a little blurry and values could be pushed more in my opinion. Nice hue variation in the skin though, that looks cool.

>>3084653
This is awesome

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>>3084839
Reference I used

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I'll probably do a background later, i'm done with it for now.

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>>3084621
I like this but it doesn't make sense. was she shot standing up? if so she would have fallen down, or if he caught her she would be dead weight. right now it looks like shes supporting herself or he's lifting her off the ground

some figure drawing

>>3084854
shade and color it

>>3084854
the ape on his arm looks pretty floaty, could use some shadow casting down onto the other ape's arm

>>3084622
her face looks pretty deformed tbqh, notice the horizontal lines that should run through eyes nose and sides of the mouth aren't parallel

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tried to do a halftone background. first drawing I did after a week break.

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>>3085020
I used concept art as reference

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>>3084854
This is fantastic. I'm gonna disagree with the other anons - It's pretty clear that what you have is to define the fabric, not actual shader. It benefits from the sharp values.


>Here's my current wip.
I'm having a really hard time keeping my lines fluid and it's shitting me to tears. I've redone the body ten times and it gets worse with each iteration, but I don't want to thicken/vary my lines too much because it's going to be finished with watercolours.

>>3084854
decent drawing, shitty concept. whatever.

>>3085063

Classic "/ic/ on a nutshell".

>>3084854
Why do I feel like I've seen a gorilla in clothes with that same EXACT face at least fifteen-thousand times already?

>>3085432

Why people are getting so triggered by that gorilla-man drawing? I don't get it, is this samefag? Is it because hes good?

Fuck off plebs.

>>3085007
will do. didn't notice it.

>>3085448
let them, I think that we humanized gorillas/chimps so much in our culture through movies and games that any time you create a gorilla doing anything it comes off as unoriginal, and I guess I understand, but I just don't really care enough to respond. Did this random thing after watching planet of the apes, to get out of my comfort zone and nothing else, was pretty fun to do too.

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I suppose cleaner, more accurate lines should be something I should improving on? Preferably with a graphite pencil?
I think I’m a little scared to see just how bad my accuracy is, so I just kind of feel around with a ball-point pen.
Had fun though.

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A wip

>>3084839
Love this!

>>3085514
/ic/-fucks think it's "gimmicky," I guess

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i painted shrek

>>3085584
face is pure nightmare

>>3084562
oh i finally got the joke, thread like the threading on a screw, very droll

>>3085052
Are your lines trash even with traditional? You can try out an app called lazy nezumi, which helps with the line control.
Nice hair.

>>3085660

Thanks... I guess. lol

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wanted to paint something with fire

>>3085652
>isis

>>3085448
>>3085514
It's definitely a well made drawing, that goes without saying. But it's such a normie looking concept I feel physically compelled to speak up.

>>3085764
holy shit anon

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I's a Study from a photo. How's this?

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>>3085676
Nah, they're fine in traditional because I don't have that ability to redo them indefinitely. I'll check it out, thanks!

>Very slight update because why not.

>>3085879
I think you should learn how to construct a head before trying to copy a real one

>>3085886
don't be a jerk, it's perfectly fine

>>3085584
Thanks man! That's a cool looking elf dude you've got going on there by the way

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apple man

>>3085930
also if you guys could keep me in your prayers because I had diarrhea today

>>3085930
man, you keep wasting so much material with every painting.

>>3085949
these are actually going to be displayed somewhere in nyc which seems to me like a huge deal but watch none of them sell

>>3085949
also no such thing as wasting paint. the only way to waste paint is be like that fucker vincent and eat it.

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I'm pretty new to drawing perspective. Can someone tell me what perspective this is? Is it one point or two point? I wanna draw a scene similar to this but I have no idea how to break it down

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>>3085969
3 point I guess, but the lower vanishing point is way below and it's not drawn precisely

>>3085990
nvm now that I look at it again it's really just 2 point

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Another one

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kind of bad but i wanted to see what i could do with the colors i put down

I need advice. I've been drawing for many years and am happy enough with my current skill progression but sometimes it just feel like shit. Everything feels like shit, every single line I draw feels wrong. This builds up into frustration and anxiety and then I just lose all confidence and am not able to draw for the rest of the day. This mostly applies to figures and it makes me doubt my construction method even though I have seen the results I can get out of it. Lately I have also been getting afraid of the blank canvas and noticed I perform much better on an already sketched piece of paper than otherwise.

I have been drawing every single day since the beginning of January. The progress has been incredible, but I feel like my mind has developed a bunch of issues that sometimes show up to hinder me.

Please help, I'm hopiing someone went through something similar and got out of it or something.

>>3086122
advice i'd give to everyone here: draw the way you drew when you first started drawing. No matter how bad or good. Picasso was a genius when he was a child, so he painted in his comfort zone his whole life. Be comfortable with how good you were when you started and stop trying to escape how good and/or bad you are. Any "improvements" you make are usually superficial, and you trying to force the idea that you are getting "better". Fuck getting better. Just be yourself.

>>3086122
hey man i'm in your boat, i think many are.

havent drawn in a couple days now. dont feel like it.

if i forced myself to namefag it would become clear how much time i spend shitposting. might be a good thing desu

>>3085584
Is she supposed to be bending forward or is she doing that hip off to the side stance woman love to do?

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>>3084854
I really like this, it would make a great desktop wallpaper

I posted this at the end of the last thread but it was too late. My gesture and perspective is weak, I know, but I'd appreciate any feedback on what I did well and what I need to work on beyond that.

>>3086286
Could use some texture on the sand and play with your light source on the dunes, right now everything looks very flat, no scale and dimension to the environment.

>>3086291
any tips on texturing? everything I tried looked kinda bad. Also, if you have any good tips for drawing environments in general, that would be cool

>>3086292
I mean less using a texture in Photoshop and more understanding the form and makeup of the environment. Think about sand, what does it feel like? How does it react to light hitting it's surface? How would clouds above cast shadows on the sand dunes below? How would a different time of day change the lighting and the form of light on the sand dunes? Take all of these things into consideration when doing environment art.

>>3086339
good thoughts anon, I'll keep this stuff in mind.
Not sure if I'm gonna try improving that piece I did any more, I'd rather start over with something new, maybe do something purely environment focused.

>>3085764
Would buy/10

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i feel like i am good enough at traditional mediums (ink,pencil,paper etc..) so now i try digital art.. its very hard. please critique?

>>3086419
It's very blurry, I think you should use more hard brushes

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ok i finally did a study after years of neglect from just drawing from imagination and hot damn i'm terrible. I can already see that I absolutely can not draw from reference and I am unable to determine proper values from an image.

so please; cleanse this poor soul off of all his bad habits, and please turn flip on your ASSBLASTING critique switch to full blown ass penetration mode to clean out all the shit ive built up over the years so hard that it comes out of my mouth, thanks.

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>>3086493
I only had 15 minutes before heading off to work so it's a bit rushed but I tried laying out a general procedure you can use. Basically working general to specific. Start off with big shapes before detailing the eyes and stuff. Constantly flick your eyes back and forth quickly between the ref and you image to judge values and shapes. Try to always get the drawing more accurate at each stage too. As you get further along in it the higher overall accuracy will allow you to see small errors in the structure that you didn't see before and that will need to be fixed. Also try staying zoomed out. I painted this with it about 2 inches tall on my screen.

>>3086419
You're clearly not good at either. I suggest you work hard on perspective

>>3086194
I guess it's a exaggerated walk stance
Just an excuse for me to make emphasis on thicc hips

>>3085916
Thanks friendo

>>3085655
I'm not aiming for a perfect-faced barbie look. But I'll take any advice you have on how to improve it

>>3085788
post your work or shut the fuck up faggot.

>>3084854
looks great dude, keep it up.

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Some drawings from the last few days.

Both buildings where from life, the T-rex from image, the two dudes from imagination.

Any opinions are appreciated

Ok so give some constructive critics about that draw i made of Nyvi.

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>>3087239

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HHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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>Let Me Show You Where I've Been
Have an elaborate glass bacckground that I'm too fucking unfocused to finish.

>>3085885
This is pretty rad. I don't know where you're taking it but it looks like an old japanese print which is awesome.

I don't usually draw weeb stuff
How did i do

>>3087283
you did good. stay away from that shit

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Opinions?

>>3087289
AGreatBigBushyBeard.meme

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>>3085764
wanted to try a different version of this

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So this was my second attempt at colouring this. By all accounts my second big use of Copic Markers.

I've got a shit ton to learn, and this was a way for me to break away from just pencil drawings. Practice with inking and applying greyscale. I'll need to articulate proper values going forward more an more. It would take me a full year to get this image just right, but I need to move forward from this project.

Feels great to break away from pencils a little.

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>>3085764
this is really nice ahh

trying out Steve Hustons head series cause Loomis is making me wanna die

>>3087356
im sure your parents are very proud

>>3087356
copics shouldn't be so streaky like that. Either refil you markers with ink or use a different paper

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>>3087342
Fire is no excuse to avoid shading.
Quick sketch bump.

>>3085969
if the eye level is exactly at the middle of the cone of vision (from where you're looking), it's 1 or 2 point.
if the cone of vision is tilted upwards or downwards it becomes 3 point, until you get to a point where you're looking straight down, then it becomes 1/2 point again

>t. Erik Olson

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looking for advice

>>3087631
Stop drawing pictures of trannies fucking Wolves.

>>3087426
Probably is a paper issue, I have been using brand new copics.

What paper works best?

>>3087821
It's been a longtime since I used copics so you should probably do further research

watercolour paper will get you vibrant colours but it'll absorb more ink so you'll go through your marker faster. Canson cold press is good

mixed media paper isn't so vibrant but it takes less work to get an even flat colour and blends and layers really nicely

I should mention too that it's how your using the markers too. colour in circular motions and go over the same area more than once until it's an even flat colour.

>>3087639
kek'd

>>3085879
Nice

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Oil on canvas

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>>3087866
And CG in one hour without eraser

>>3087853
Thank you, gonna screen cap this.

>>3087867
>without eraser
emm.. painting over with another colour then??

>>3087937
Yes

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just studies

>>3087866
props! great detailwork. trees + grass need more love. Looks out of place and kinda bob ross. esp at the left I'd expect the trees to go in front of the church.

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>>3084562
How to clothes?

Feeling out painting clothes and colour for a more graphic design look. Resorted to using shapes to get form. My only lead aside from copying people in clothing is learning drapery but I feel it plateaus at a point where then the best move comes back to copying real clothes.

>>3087867
>>3087866

glorious

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>>3087275

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I've learnt color for a month, how do I do?

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>>3087866
someone already said it but those trees are really taking away from the piece. I don't think you'll get the trees right by fiddling with it, so here's what I'd do. The building is so well done, that instead of ruining the painting by overworking the trees, you should remove them all together, and instead make the building exist on a flat plane in an illustrative way.

something abstract like this.

I just don't know if you'll be able to complete those trees convincingly, and I'd like to see the building shine. I just think you should save tree practice for a piece that isn't as good as this one. Even if that means you need to make this more of an abstract piece.

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Da Vinci copy and like 15% of Mucha's most famous image but couldn't be bothered with going further on that. Some freehand ellipses too. First time trying to copy Da Vinci and I gotta say I think I have a new-found appreciation for his seemingly effortless and subtle cross hatching. Kind of winged it on the neck tendons without worrying about accuracy. Mucha hair, too.

>>3088120
Not bad!

>>3086286
I like it, but I would not want to be punched by him.

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>>3088192
another guy

>>3088156
draw bigger senpai

>>3088199
Really? They are both almost five inches tall... I think that's alright for a couple of sketches. I agree bigger is better in general but even Scott Robertson usually works in smaller sizes and blows stuff up in Photoshop that he likes if he wants to render it.

>>3088237
really desu senpai. The difference is that he uses a very thin marker/pen. The reason I suggested you draw bigger is because your lines are so thick that the lines suggesting texture are indiscernible from the lines that make up your forms. I typically draw 6+ inches in all directions, and if you ever want to do big pieces like the masters, you definitely want to start drawing big. It helps with a lot as long as you take a few moments every now and then to step back and look at the bigger picture
Also start thinking in forms

>>3088120
The colors are definitely a strong point.
I like the ambitiousness of the composition, but it could use improvement. Like I think it would serve the piece well if you expanded the canvas down and to the right, so not only is the action better centered, but so the figures feel more connected to the ground. As it is now, they get cut off.
I really like the warped curvature of what we can see of the ground. It gives a strong radial composition and it reflects the clouds circling the sun. But again, it feels cut off here.

>>3088259
I see your point and I concede to it

>>3088269
Thank you, I agree. I should have asked here sooner.
I don't know if I can expand the canvas well at this stage, but I'll try

>>3088285
I'd say go for it just as an experiment/sketch.

>>3088301
Definitely. Usually I do the planning, composition stuffs on paper
>>3088160
Thank you

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I hope its cool if I post a collage of my drawings...

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Can anyone recommend what should be my next step towards good rendering?
A book, an exercise, anything.

>>3085879
Neat, but it could some hard edges. A couple around her eyes and nose to bring the attention to the important bits.

>>3085969
Your best chance is probably to use the table as an anchor and then construct the figures in circles around it, as if it was an amphitheatre.

The table is in 3 point, but you should pick a much simpler scene if you're new to this.

>>3088156
At this stage only use ink to practice line confidence, when you want to describe form, use a more forgiving medium, like ballpoint pen, regular or charcoal pencil. Ink flattens everything out if you don't have a solid understanding of form to back it up.
Keep drawing, keep improving.

>>3086517
Not him, but thank you for your time.You didn't stick to the ref too much but it turned out to be a good thing.

>>3088324
The Papa Emeritus is great.

>>3088433
How to Render, Scott Robertson. You can also check his youtube channel

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>>3084562

>>3084857
Proportions aren't entirely natural but there's a certain degree of character to that. Nice one anon!

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yea still working on this. as of lately. Instead of giving up on an illustration, I now find the problems with the image and actually finish it, instead of being a lazy cunt and giving up.

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>>3087853
Well I went over the piece and did what I could to clear up streaking issues. While this is unfortunately polishing a turd it still is much better than what I presented earlier.

I used a Canson 14x17 70lb page for this. Unfortunately it is a Drawing Pad. I'll need to acquire their Marker Pad going forward.

Will have to stick to doing pencil practice with inking practices for now with this paper.

Again, thank you.

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So I wanted to see what everyone thinks. I'm giving these to my gf as a present. Visually what can I do better?

>>3088828
was definately worth it, nice job mang. And good luck with finding paper, do be careful with the marker paper, they can really be a hit or miss. And specifically look up if they're good with copics. Some markers will work fantastic with a brand but another type of marker will do really poorly.

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Most of the players in the d and d game I'm running, really struggling with the Aarakocra and the Abyssal Tiefling. Sorry about the resolution, the width was changed to 1000 to fit within regulation.

>>3088840

bigger penis

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>>3088860

Im almost 6 inches bud, I think I've got that covered

>>3088856
looks good but why are they naked

>>3088192
>>3088195
i like

>>3088874
Most people I draw are naked
>my fundies are shit and I can't draw clothes

>>3086286
His arms look really short

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Painting a qt

>>3084656
yea this is good, you should be proud!!

>>3088977
looks dumb.

>>3085886
it's fine wtf lmao

>>3087275
love this, blog?

>>3087859
i like this, but try uniform shadows, and have a clear core shadow - right now I think your drawing is suffering from your methodology rather than your knowledge

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polishing some shat.

>>3088977
the mouth is terrible anon, and the nose is really ugly. I guess you have a similar nose am i right, or ur gf or the people of ur family? Anon, this nose is disgusting. Look at some references from qts to paint a nice, white, european, and beatiful nose. The angle the mouth is tilted is really weird too, making her look sad, but in a stupid and dumb way.

>>3088553
Thank m8

>>3088977
cute

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>>3086286
The thing that really pops to mind, is the lighting is WAY too weak for the desert. The desert is all sun, it's hard, sharp, deep shadows and bright highlights. You'd get soft shadows and lighting like that on an overcast day. Also, the sky in the desert is a deep, brilliant blue, and the colors on a non-overcast day are saturated and deep.
The legs are a little awkward, you need more experience rendering cloth and texture, and the hands are too big, and the thumb on the right hand would need to be broken to be in that position.

Good attempt, but this is a little over your ability level.

>>3087853
The preferred paper for markers is bristol paper. Watercolor paper is not good for markers, as it will bleed, regardless of what the finish is - and is more expensive than bristol. After bristol, the next best surface is hot press illustration board.

>>3087866
Pretty good. The lighting is a little funky - the dome has a bright highlight, but the trees have none, and the clouds don't show a light source like that, either - and the lighting on the structure overall is flat.

>>3088851
Glad to hear it was worth it. Will have to experiment with that paper. I have heard of copics on some paper leaving sticky residue that pools. Hopefully the Marker Pad doesn't do that.

>>3088977
Don't use grey for fleshtones. She looks like half a cadaver.

Cool tones, use blues, purples, etc. Warm tones, use oranges and yellows and reds.

Watch this video. He's talking about the classic oil palette to create skin - it's easily transferred to the digital domain.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_52sLXd3sk0

>>3087227
nice, I like the leaves and everything seems comfy

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>>3085584
redline, idk

>>3088876
ty c:

>>3089001
Hue shifting. Do it. Cooler shadows, warmer highlights, etc

>>3088977
Looks good. Just needs you to flesh out the finer details. And give more depth to her face with a greater range of values. And grey is fine, but you have to stick with that. You can't give her grey under eyes for no reason without it being consistent with the lighting (cool shadows in several places).
Also stop blending in a curved motion along her cheeks like she's a saggy bitch. It'll be more dynamic if her skin has hue and value shifts in more places. Needs more detail overall. /braindump

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>>3088982

Thanks! :DD

I need to get back to it, but instead I started another piece and I'll probably at least try to finish it first before going back to Geralt.

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>>3089813

>>3089743
Thanks dude! I love you. This will be very useful

>>3088889
>>3089270
Good advice, thanks anons. Looks like I need to grind some more anatomy and do more studies on rendering.

>>3089832
Nice dude, got any web presence?

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>>3089003
>>3089276
>>3089820
Slight improvement?

>>3089951

I started to update my tumblr again and I'm trying to draw as much as I can everyday. I'll see how much this motivation will last. lol

vinicam.tumblr.com

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>>3090021
tired girl is cute. CUTE!

>>3089832
that tree is THICC

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>>3089743
>>3089879
You can keep the original pose though. Justt sayyinnnnn

>>3090048
>>3090021
girl? there's nothing feminine about "her"

>>3090071
Crimson lips, small button nose, round head, large eyes, soft overall features.

ahhhhh, you're retarded.

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>>3090021
Her eyes are so big. Post your ref or is this 100% imagination?

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I'm trying to draw a dwarf so the build should be stocky, broad, muscular, and of course short. I'm having trouble with the lower proportion such as the legs. Do they need to start lower? How small should the calves be on a dwarf? Red-line critique would be much appreciated!

>>3090073
Mostly imagination, but I'm using references for some things.
>>3090071
>implying I'm not drawing a female (male)

>>3090067
Sure, sure. But the hands and arms were a great help and so is this. Thank you so much again, for taking the time to redline :>
Also got a blog? Mirin your construction skills

>>3090072
no you doo-doo head

>>3090071
It's 2017. You don't have to look feminine to be a girl.

>>3090060
I dont get it... thats the idea. :0

>>3090137
he obviously meant a REAL girl.

>>3090137

If you're a female and not feminine you're just some creature not a girl/woman.

>>3090199
can you keep your creepy political opinions out of the draw thread, there's a whole board of junk threads to be a cunt in, leave this one alone

and that goes for whoever you were replying to as well, keep the cross-chatter down

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Can somebody crit this pls? Am I foreshortening correctly?

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Please critique on this. It's the longest time I've had on any single piece so far.

Also first time using CSP, if anyone has any tips on specific brush packs or workflow (specially the rendering stage, still quite lost with good ways to blend/differentiate edges between layers)

Thanks

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Hyper-sexualized Teens

>>3090286
Muh [dik]

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This turd is polished. Thanks for trying to help me save it fellas, but it's time to move on to something else.

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>>3090224
I did more stuff. pls crit.

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Why do I suck so bad.

>>3090355
Because what you're trying to to do is harder to pull off than you think.

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>>3089832

Flats and first shadow pass on Bulma... So much more to do. :[

>>3090021
You're on the right track. Seeing color in skin is hard for a lot of people, and photos often strip a lot of that out - which is why drawing and painting people in person can be so much more powerful, you'll see the colors reflected in the skin. The more you do it, the more you'll see it, and the more experience you'll have - and remember things like "Redheads have very translucent skin, so they reflect a TON of color in their skin", so if drawing a redhead, pump the colors up. Environment can influence what colors are there, too.

>>3090318
Much better than where you started. Do you feel like you learned anything?

>>3084697
I thought the same thing
>>3084621
The arrows seem unnecessary. Why not just make it a knight embracing his lady

>>3090379
>Do you feel like you learned anything?
Not to obsess over making everything perfect the first time. Sometimes it's better to just get something down, then step away and come back with a fresh mind at a later time. Also, that
there's value in simplifying details. I started with an overly-rendered eyeball, then decided towards the end to redo them and simply them a bit. Now I think the eyes are my favorite part.

I can compare this with other portraits I've painted pretty recently and can see a bit of improvement, so that's nice.

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Watched Southpaw and wanted to draw an alien boxer.

>>3088871
draw your penis and post it (no putting it on the paper and drawing around it)

Critique on my thread welcome, thanks guys.

>>3088310

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Quick pastel stick sketch.

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I draw like a snail, how the fuck can you faggots draw so fast? This pic took me 3 weeks and i haven't even finished it yet

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this one is shit i know.

>>3090847

It's good, technically. The pose is unnatural, and the hip should be twisted more, don't you think?

Still nice drawings, this and the two former you posted.

Feel free to criticize >>3090705

>>3090844

What parts took the longest? Any idea how many hours you spent on it over the 3 weeks?

>>3090861
Sketch and lining took most of the time tbqh.

>>3090844
Don't worry about time. It's better to be slow and accurate than fast and half-assed.

>>3090864
Hmm... If it was the rendering I would probably be able to help more, sorry. The only thing I can offer is that maybe you could try something very different stylistically and see if it works better for you? Like skipping lineart entirely, painting over your sketch, trying new brushes, that kind of thing. Stabilization can make lineart a lot harder sometimes, too.

And though I did it for rendering, it helped me a lot to force myself to do things to at least messy completion under a time slot. 5 min, 15 min, 30 min, 60 min mostly

>>3090847
>>3090841
>>3090839
bloq? your lines are nice and the first drawing is great

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just finished this drawing,

pretty boring but it feels okay as a purely technical exercise, excited to do some more interesting things now.

>>3091251
Smooth shading. Did you take measurements for the proportions or place the forms by eye?

>>3090274 here...any feedback pls?

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My stuff from this thread

>>3088310

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I want to take samba lessons but i don't have a partner, anyone here want to go with me?

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wip wip wip wip
>>3091251
I like this. It's a really solid portrait.

>>3085652
stop

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>>3087859
i like the flowy fleshyness

>>3091359
eye perspective looks a bit off

>>3090801
Explain.

>>3091470
plz teach me cross hatching senpai

>>3091359
Blog?? Please

>>3091517
do the opposite of what that guy did

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>>3085583
nice sketch

>>3085764
i like how you approached fire, also nice colors with the blues and purples

>>3088192
i dig your lines

>>3090224
noo.. proportions are off, hands are bad and all seems crooked. sry mate, how about draw box-people?

>>3091305
quite nice, more contrast?

Yesterdays drawing, quite wierd position but i think it came out more or less aight, hm?

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Is he in perspective with the grid? He's supposed to be bounding on one leg. I suspect I may need to lower the horizon line.

>>3091758
he looks like he is mocking Skating Legolas from Helm's Deep

>>3090335
>>3090224
don't listen to that dickhead, The proportions aren't terrible. Besides whats the point of saying "proportions are off" and not saying which ones?

The chair and other stuff you added isn't working and not at all on the same plane, your prior sketch was much better.

I dont have a tablet on me to redline but assuming it's purely from imagination, your doing a lot of stuff right in the body but the head and neck is totally flat, its clear your not thinking of them as 3d elements or you lost it.. The neck connecting to head can be tricky at first but try drawing a curving cylinder with a circle or square on top for the head until you start to get the hang of it. A common bad habit some people have is to think of and draw a 3d head and ribcage and then just draw two flat lines to connect them without thinking about if it really works spatially. The neck essentially connects in the complete middle of the head of that makes any sense, you have the head too far forward so it looks like a mask.

The arm that's up is also totally flat, that's why the shoulder muscle isn't wrapping around that arm properly, your forearms are especially flat and wonky. The hands aren't the worst but totally still off.

Basically your thinking in 3d form for parts of it, the body seems fine but your flattening other parts of the body you aren't familiar with, and drawing them 2d. Also, don't avoid feet, draw a little triangle or something for the feet if you have to, but always ground the figure or you'll be more inclinded to draw flat. Seeing feet on a plane is one of the best ways to orientate a figure in space and begin to see it that way.

>>3084653
I really love this, Anon.

>>3091738
Pretty badass

>>3091766
how am i a dickhead? did i insult him or sperg all over him and i didnt notice?

>>3091777
why thank you!

>>3091808
pretty cool, good likeness too

>>3091738

This would be a cool shirt!

>>3091770

Thanks! I'll get back to it today is I finished my Bulma piece.

>>3091808

This is really really good. :0

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>>3091808
Wonderfull Lightning and expression :o

Just sharing this goat guy I made not too long ago.

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>>3090367
Finished it. It's not exactly the final look I was looking for, but it's ok. "Finished, not perfect."

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>>3091808

>>3092010
Dude when you learn to do a more flattering render you will be unstoppable. The flat colors and lines were great. Right now its a little muddy and unpolished, but hey, its awesome nontheless. Good job!

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>>3092040

Thanks! I'm flattered. :0

I desaturated it a little and it looks less muddy, but I get your point.
Maybe I should take a step back in the rendering or go further like my work in pic related.

Right now I'm aiming at Jake Wyatt and Kevin Hong works for what I want my art to look like, but Jake has a more contrasty palette with dirtier, but more graphical look and Kevin Hong has a more clear and soft work overall.
I'm not really sure for where I should go from now, maybe I should have worked more on the lines to make them tighter and stopped the lightning passes some steps earlier.

What you guys think?

>>3091758
Could someone give some helpful advice here? I think it would be more convincing if the horizon line was at about the center of his rib cage, but I'm not sure.

>>3091758
No he's not, the left leg being stretched downward like that makes it look like he's standing on one leg

There's no line width variation

>>3092158
I asked if it looks like he's on one leg... thanks?

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WIP: colors and values on the body will be edited. stuck on what to do for the horns/ trying to make the tits look more passable.

>>3092112
overall very cute, though i think in the future you should be more conservative with the range of line weights you are using because the thicker ones don't work well in certain areas like on the figures and the luggage on top of the cabin.

>>3092168
>overall very cute, though i think in the future you should be more conservative with the range of line weights you are using because the thicker ones don't work well in certain areas like on the figures and the luggage on top of the cabin.

Ah, that is an old work of mine that I just used to illustrate what direction I should take to improve. Anyway it's a good critique that I think applies to the Bulma piece too.

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done with it.

>>3092400
fookin nice

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How am I doing?

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This charcoal brush set is great for figure practice.

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Expressions for a character I am creating. Pointers would be lovely.

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>>3092021
that level of asymettry is pretty normal. slightly more noticeable on this guy though.

>>3090958
naked-oats.tumblr.com

>>3092400
Gorgeous values and edges, but overall it's a bit bland, like a corpse.

You could round up some subsurface scattering and secondary light reference and do a second round of study, focusing on appealing color variations.

>>3092550
doesn't look much like charcoal though

(not casting distributions on your drawing, which is very nice, aside from those little bits of scribbling)

>>3092700
nice photo of him aside from too much sharpening, never really thought about what a nice face he has for art

>>3092904
distributions lol, aspersions, i meant

>>3092021
>Illustration of a real, living person.
>Real, living people are asymmetrical and heavily flawed.
>Comparing an illustration of an asymmetrical and heavily flawed person to an artistic ideal like a fucking classical sculpture.

Get the fuck out of art, m8.

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Please comment

>>3092925

Shit, forgot about size, sorry folks

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>>3092925

And this.

Gotta be careful with color use. It's too similar in these 2 are too similar

>>3084854
funky af

>>3091808
this looks alive vibe

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Thoughts going forward?

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>>3093053
This is the line art I have a shitty scanner

>>3093053
looks cool, render it.

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Wew finally done

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>>3092700
>>3092907
Right? his face is messed up in a good way, it's very expressive. I was just watching a video on youtube and every little light that shines on him makes his face light up with very cool stuff. just made me want to study him.

here is the ref, he was in the midle of talking and I took the more stable frame possible from youtube tough.

>>3092932
thx m8

>>3092930
well shit, I was listening to the funk playlist on spotify while I did that

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Early line art for a painting i'm working on.

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Anyone have expert opinion on how to paint fabrics? also critique on pic is welcomed.

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>>3093053
>>3093088
But how do I render if I'm colorblind, also any color theory tips? I'm way out of my depth. But I'm shooting for comfy ghibli

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Comments? digital painting

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>>3093343
If she let's the ball drop, how does it end up in front of her? I'm having a hard time imagining this in motion.

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>>3085584
>>3089743
Slapped some color on it. Not sure if it looks interesting enough to be properly rendered yet but i had fun nontheless.
(Stole your hand idea anon! Thank you)

>>3093421
imo figure it out via drawing, then paint

I kinda dig the fog

>>3093430
I did draw the character beforehand :p
I had no concern about anatomy.

>>3093427
you're gettin' there anon

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I don't understand the point in posting studies on these threads? what do you want? I'm guessing validation on you copying skills. The source of the study is your best teacher,there is very littles of value other people can crit regarding studies.

TLDR,STOP POSTING STUDIES
rather apply them,and then post on here


early sketch,still lacking many things.
threw in some color tones for reference


>>3092010
you got a pretty good sense of composition already! keep grinding on the rest! as for this piece,I just think the shadowed area could be a bit more light and warm
>>3093065
are you sure you didn't fuck with the settings?
>>3093409
you fucking render it in B/W.
Just read Color and Light ,by James Gurney

>>3093215
Very nice! I love the soft look and i think the background really sells it

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>>3084562
WIP, I finally enjoy drawing again

>>3093466
wow, really nice man

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Pastel sketch of a waterfall from today.

>>3093466
I always wonder how much autism someone needs to capture so much detail

>>3093736
he looks too stiff and emotionless, i like it tho! this is going gud

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A sketch of Nemesis...

>>3093427

I think it need more room for the character. Top of head and on the sides. Feels a little claustrophobic.

Other than that I love it.

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Portrait sketch from Starbucks. One large coffee. Fuck you! Peace.

>>3093450
Thanks :D ill keep workin on it

>>3093836
Thats actually some good ass advice! Didnt thought of it but it makes total sense. Thank you and im very glad that you like it so far!

>>3093703
that's literally how painting works. it's not even that detailed

>>3093423
I know the perspective is a bit wonky, although I think its mostly correct. She's dropping the ball to her diagonal left. And the camera is slightly below her center.

*rapid hand waves in quick succession*

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Rate and critique me please.

>>3093874
2/10
Stop petting lines with your pencil.
Vary your line thickness and value using thicker and darker lines in the foreground. I appreciate the silhouette form and foreshortening attempt. Keep drawing.

>>3093874
>>3093880
What he said, and imo learn some construction and gesture. I know it's a meme here now, but Loomis is a good start.

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Can someone tell me what's wrong with his right eye (our left)? People keep telling me that his eye is off. If so, can someone point out to me where his eye should be located?

>>3093884
Observe the orbital bone around the ocular cavity and its connection with the arch of the cheek. The plane shift created by the orbital is absent from your picture, among many other anatomical landmarks.

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>>3093908
Forgot my reference picture.

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>>3093908
It's the art style, I'm not aiming for hyperrealism (if I was I would use paper and pencil) But I'm asking if the eye is tilted wrong or if it's off looking. Thank you for the feedback though.

>>3093938
Your style is not widely appealing and amateurish.

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Lmao I said that was the art style, not necessarily mine.... I mean I'm pretty fluid when it comes to art styles. I'm a fast learner and shit I'm self taught so I'm not good at much.

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>>3093938
where is he supposed to be ooking? becasue right now it looks as if he's rolling his eyes.

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>>3093960
He is supposed to be looking upwards... I can see how you thought that.

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Had a lot of fun with this. I've always been too afraid to draw quick and loose like this, but after admiring some 3rd strike concept art I thought fuck it, I'll give it a shot. There's such a flow to it, the resulting expressiveness and messiness of it is so appealing to me.

>>3093736
Man, the posing is just.. this is the pose you make before a spear runs through your ribs, not during that.
Rewinding the guy to the moment when he was ABOUT TO stab her + making the background support that dynamic would make this work much better.

>>3094220
this one doesn't quite have the same je ne sais quoi as the other one

>>3094334
I personally think it is the expression. The previous study had a nice emotive quality to the facial expression. He looked worried which was complimented by the stark (pun?) contrast of the high lit face and black background. Bron isn't a well known actor or face. So it read to me as a nice emotional face study. This one is simply a smirking celebrity. A well known celebrity of which there is innumerable art already. So this just reads as fan art, which is boooooring. Nicely rendered though anon definitely has ability.

>>3093938
no be honest with yourself. you have no idea how the planes of the head work and would do well to heed anons advice

>>3093421
lmao

>>3094334
>>3094435
I think it'll look better once I finish the other half, it's one of the very rare moments in the show where he lets out some emotion, it's a pretty powerful frame with some great lighting on top so it was interesting to me.

or maybe should I remove the smile ?

>>3090286
hawt

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hope you like noise....

>>3094667
If you feel strongly about the frame keep the smile and I will reserve judgement until it's further along. I still expect the bron piece to resonate more, but work hard give it your best and prove me wrong

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give it to me straight. lines and coloring and anatomy how'd i do and how do i get better?

>>3093938
I was going to be gentle, but:
>it's not wrong, it's my style!
you are in the wrong place son

you have fundamentals to perfect before you can even think about developing a style. you don't have to be drawing "hyperrealism"; drawing shitty cartoons is no excuse for having no understanding of the basics.

you have zero understanding of how an eye fits into an eye socket (he's rolling his eyes, that's why they look so terrible), how to structure the forms of the face (I can see your guesswork on where to fit the eyes, nose and mouth) and where the head sits on the neck, to name a few.

go to /beg/ and practice, and i highly suggest taking this advice and this >>3093908 advice if you want to get better than the boring amateurs saturating deviantart and tumblr that don't care about fundamentals

tl;dr - study some damn Loomis

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>>3093736

>>3093751
thanks,I tried to fix it somewhat.Still working on it tho

>>3094329
I had not seen you comment since I started fixing it.
although that might be visually ideal,I want to depict the stabbed women.
>making the background support that dynamic would make this work much better.
huh yes,I'm just not quite sure how I'm going to do that.I guess I'l have to experiment with it.

>>3095232
I dig it! reminds os "Bully" art style.Her arms are awkwardly posed.
lmao hypebeast shit

>>3095396
study that precise pose.She is putting more weight on her left leg,so we should see a slightly bent left knee and a straight right light. You've drawn both knees at the same height.
perspective on the phone is totally fucked. We should be able to see the lower part of the phone(where the charge port is located).
Feet are too big.I'd rather see something cell shaded in this.It's like you cell shaded it and then softened the edges.It's not a full render.

>>3095396
Well this is fun! I would suggest either adding or removing more values from your shading. Your shading gradation is in a strange middle stage right now that makes the shading look choppy and streaky. Overall, your proportions look decent, but the fabric could be more naturalistic (does not necessarily need to be). I enjoyed your line variation. Nice work!

>>3096146
>>3096577
Thank you for the advice. I did kind of rush the coloring because I spent too long on just the sketch of her and I'm trying to get better at using lines. Mine don't look good I think.

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early wip

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quick update last for the day will post more tomorrow

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Planning idea for a new piece, put the girl in there to easy to visualize.
Now /ic/, is this angle too "generic" and boring? i'm thinking of lowering the angle and change it to 2 point perspective on 2 side, thought?