My second work in illustrator. Your criticism?

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2017-07-29 07:37:24 Post No. 3078039
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Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:37:24 Post No. 3078039 [Report]

My second work in illustrator. Your criticism?

Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:50:39 Post No.3078046
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Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:50:39 Post No.3078046 [Report]

too much leading, moon grabs focus but lacks detail, "+" white stars are grabbing too much attention

Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:51:34 Post No.3078047
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Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:51:34 Post No.3078047 [Report]

It
Needs
More
Make us feel that statement with the typography.

Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:54:20 Post No.3078053
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Anonymous 2017-07-29 07:54:20 Post No.3078053 [Report]

>>3078039
Boring composition. What's the illustration about?
The dude? Make him bigger and darken the Moon.
The space? Make the dude smaller and put him off to the side rather than dead center.

Anonymous 2017-07-29 09:03:34 Post No.3078136
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Anonymous 2017-07-29 09:03:34 Post No.3078136 [Report]

>>3078039
Could be worse
Also:
>Being critical in a field that is nothing but subjective

My second work in illustrator. Your criticism?

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