In need of critique

>>3076990
You wasted 4.5 hours. The proportions are wrong. Foreheads too large. Facial features too small. Chin too large. It's a mess and it needs to be redrawn with special care taken to get all the proportions and placement correct. Likeness is not easy and takes practice. Good luck.

>>3077030
Okay, thank you for your honesty. What is your opinion on tracing the outline when it's for a commission? Is it an absolute no- or can it be forgiven to save time?

>>3077041
To be fair, if you're getting paid for it and you're not misleading the buyer by telling them the drawing is all freehanded then you can get away with it. No rules just tools. Just make sure you don't trace if you're trying to learn because it will hinder you.

>>3076990
this doesnt need its own thread, newfriend. more people will be willing to cooperate with you if you had the courtesy to cooperate with the board

>>3077048
Okay thank you.
>>3077052
Sorry, I didn't know which thread to post in. Thank you for the advice though.

>>3076990
Get better and get a real job because working at McDonalds pays more than that shit.

>>3076990
I bet the person who paid you will be satisfied with that; it's not like they coughed up a fortune.

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>>3077173
Haha yeah, unfortunately I'm a student who can't a proper job rn. Usually my art's a heck of a lot better (see pic), this one was a bit of a flop though :/

>>3077177
Yeah he would be really happy if I drew just a stick woman, but I don't want to give him anything I'm not happy with though :D

Thank you for the advice everyone :)