Hey m8s! Few weeks ago I made a post about my first animation short (/ic/ers made over 200 views, thanks for that!), so now here is my new animation loop. Im interested in any construstive feedback!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E49zYHlwokk
Animation-wise: The timing and spacing are kind of boring
Design-wise: The outlines are a bit too thin, you can't really see them clearly. That yellow is too much for me, makes me not want to look at the animation at all. And why this aspect ratio?