Porn Thread

>>3063219
Looks like a /beg/ thread img

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Anyone want to trade art? I'll draw whatever for pictures of this bitch.

>>3063235
gr8b8m8

>>3063259
wow, in the last year you haven't improved the slightest.

>>3063305
post your work.

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>>3063235
>>3063302
>>3063314

OP here. this thread is not for shitposting. leave.

>>3063319
watch out we have the OP here. better listen to them. it's the OP after all.

fucking kek.

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>>3063319

>>3063326
>>3063334
OP here again. and again, this thread is not for shitposting. you've been told to leave so please do so.

>>3063326
Badly drawn porn is serious business.

>>3063302
How is it bait, it looks like shit lol

>>3063259
Why is it appealing for them to connect to the top of the chest like that? Maybe 2D just isn't for me.

>>3063346
it isn't, its just a bad drawing

>>3063259
>anime_before_realism.jpg

>>3063346
It's just how kissless virgins draw tits.

>>3063338
nobody cares if you are OP

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>>3063342
Especially when OP involved.
You better hide, unless you wanna be caught shitposting.

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>>3063395
OP here (see pic related for evidence). you're making an assumption. as the OP of this thread I'd appreciate it if you didn't use an authoritative tone when conjecturing.

>>3063414
OP here (don't believe it? see pic related!). you've been told to leave twice already. go.

>>3063428
I don't believe you are OP, I'll need more evidence.
Please keep us updated.

>>3063428
I believe you OP, I can't believe how mean everyone is being in YOUR thread! They should listen to you more since you're the OP!

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Moved the tits down some, I'm always afraid of drawing them too low.

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rate first porn pic ive ever drawn
me not know how to draw nipple

took me hour and half

>>3063682
anti-gravity boobs

>>3063695
she is a space goat dranei from outland so yes

>>3063682
jesus, this is fucking awful. I can taste the grape freezepop just looking at this.

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>>3063319
Well golly I guess it's time to leave

>>3063682
>An hour and a half
Is Anon trying to take away from how much Anon sucks?

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A WIP of something I've been working on. How does it look so far? I'm a bit nervous about how her right breast looks in terms of anatomy, but also, how does the general gesture look? Any other critique is welcome, thanks for your time!

>>3063798
Beginner thread, maybe it's still not too late.

>>3063892
Could you be more specific?

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>>3063710
That is not what a draenei is supposed to look like anon. First off, you drew the horns like cattle horns and that's not what Draenei females have. You have to overlap shapes, and try to think in 3D.

Look at what I'm trying to do with my pic. Yes the subject matter is depraved. Not the point. The point I'm trying to make here is that when you pose a character, even if it's up close, try to draw outside of your frame to get a sense of the whole figure. Draw a rectangular prism in perspective, and cut that in half, there, that's going to be the halfway mark of the human figure.

Before you even think about color I want you to always consider the figure. There's also a matter of her breasts. A method I use to get a rough idea for them is to draw a point marking the "ball" of the neck, and draw a heart like shape around with that point as the tip. I've also noticed that the breasts connect closely to slightly underneath the armpit.

Alright, rate my absolute depravity. Still in rough stages, want to take it to line tonight.

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>>3063219
Hey there, OP. This is my attempt to drawing a "THICC" body. As you can see from the excessive breast size, I want to become an ecchi artist one day. I've been practicing for 7 years but I do admit that the practice was an on and off basis. Looking at my past art, I CAN say that I have improved in terms of proportion and stuff, I purposefully changed the proportions around in attempt to create my own style. My other art is not as consistently good as this current one that I made. So what do you think? R8/ H8 away. I'll be happy to take any advice that you can give me in order for me to improve.

Is furry allowed here? I have a lot of furry smut id like some crit on

>>3063903
Holy... the horse with the girl under it is a pretty fantastic idea, imo, maybe it's just me, is it wrong that it gave me a little boner even though i am not into animals or anything related to it?

Not meme'ing, where do you post your stuff usually?

>>3064044
I do have a hentai foundry page, look up OtherSpike. I'm planning on getting back into smut art for commissions so I can pay the bills. I'm not the first one to come up with the bellyride idea. Hopefully I won't be the last.

As for animal love, the boner you have is likely from the notion that a character is so horny and insatiable that anything will do. "A cat is fine too," as the saying goes.

>>3064038
Beginner thread, start with basics, my man.

>>3064038
I'd say it would look fine, but your approach is not working.

Say it with me kids.

P R O C E S S
R
O
C
E
S
S

This is your friend.

Don't leave things unfinished if you're going to more definitive line and detail unless you're doing something related to concept work with costumes.

If you had stuck with creating basic shapes like you had done with the head, and referenced proportions, you could have been fine.

Some of your line and body shapes for the arms and legs especially tend to go parallel in some instances. Arm and leg shapes tend to go "straight line, versus curved line". It lends to more rhythm and motion with it all and moreover helps sell the pose.

>>3064080
Thanks for the advice! I'll be sure to take this into consideration when I'm doing anatomy study.

>>3064078
Will do, my dude.

>>3063259
>>3063631

It's appealing, do you post anywhere?

>>3064238
Not at the moment, sorry.

>>3063752
> that gif
What the hell was that?

>>3064038
You are trying to make the character look thicker by making the shoulders thinner. It isn't anatomically correct and it makes the torso look very condensed. Putting the arms in any other angle would look awkward.

Also the breasts arent at all supported by the shirt so it looks like she is wearing basically nothing.

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last digit

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yo, is anyone here good at feet

>>3063752
source

>>3064849
http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/

>>3064858
thx man, thats some really good feet

>>3064849
kienan lafferty has a youtube channel and I think he has some notes on drawing feet that might be useful to you.

You seem to unintentionally draw cankles.

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Anything off I don't see?

>>3064957
nice

>>3064957
why do you keep coming here you dumb hamster

>>3064957
the face is a pancake

>>3064957
is that thing walking, flying, falling, lying down or none of the above?

>>3064993
you sure are reaching there retard

>>3065032
ah, you don't know either

>>3064985
Wherever I post I never get any (genuine) critique.
Here I mostly get useless stuff like this >>3064988
or no critique at all. But sometimes I manage to get at least some kind of help, like here >>3064993
I thought it was obvious she's floating, but I guess it's not conveyed good enough.

It's at least something.
It's hard to improve when you get only praise either because people don't have a critical eye, or they are too kind to tell you what they really think. You assholes at least don't pretend. And some of you actually know a thing or two.

>>3064957
>>3065069
Okay. So she's floating you say. From the looks to me my initial response was that she was leaning on something. Then I saw what her hand was actually doing.

It's hard for me to say, for sure, but if you want to sell floating, at least give her a ground shadow in space to indicate that she's not on the ground.

Otherwise to me it looks like she's laying down, or leaning.

>>3065087
The client wants some kind of space-ish like background with stars and galaxies, etc.
I'll probably try to rework the pose a bit, so that she doesn't look like she's laying on some surface so much.

>>3065099
Space would probably do just that really. Are you locked into that one perspective? Client wants full frontal nudity?

>>3065105
Now that you mention it, I still have to put her in a dress. I'll probably manage to give her a better sense of floating with the drapery.

>>3065087
>>3065105
>>3065113
Also, thanks!

>>3065113
oh, fabric too huh? I'd adjust the pose so it doesn't look like she's leaning at least, and handle the drapery.

You're likely better at sketching than me but to me that looks like a fairly well rendered drawing already.

>>3065069
he meant that as a critique. Her face is literally facing the audience without any angle. It's straight forward.

>>3065117
Are you seriously explaining me what he meant?
I know what he meant, it's just that that doesn't help me at all, simply because I don't see that in this case. I mean, if her head was head on, then her ears wouldn't be so low, her nose wouldn't be so close to her eyes, and her mouth wouldn't be so far from her chin.
I could probably rework the jaw better, but I prefer to keep appeal over realism in this case (and no, it's not a freaking muh style excuse).

>>3065114
You're welcome, now I don't suppose you could help me with this?
>>3063903

I think I noticed a couple of things off while mirroring my canvas, but so far I've gotten no immediate "this anatomy is outright wrong even stylized, alter this" kinds of statements.

As >>3065117
said, now that I look at it again, my gut reaction is that it's the eyes throwing off the angle of the face. They look a little off, and that key detail throws off the entire face. Otherwise I think you're fine for that part of her.

>>3065124
>you could help me with this?
That's a hard one, cause I would probably pick a different pov (probably a lower one) and try to make the whole pic more crowded leaving out all the "unnecessary" space. I know you are trying to convey that this is a huge arena, but Imo with a narrower perspective, you could still capture that feeling, tho putting the different characters having sex into separate overlapping planes, with the spectators far in the background. You'd have to do some smart positioning to show all the juicy bits, but I think this would do you a huge favor in terms of making the artwork and mood more personal (by putting the viewer inside the arena as close as possible to the action).
This would require you to redraw the whole thing tho, so probably I'm not giving you any help here.

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>>3065136
Most of the ref I gathered on circuses always displayed them from high angles. So I went with that mostly.

I understand what you mean about making the viewer more drawn into the action. So I think if I brought the background audience closer to the action that might help sell the spectacle a little.

Maybe frame it with some foreground silhouettes too?

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not really porn but I dunno, I liked this particular sketch I just did. Perhaps I'm going to paint it next. Any suggestions?

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>>3065211
I would do this

>>3065211
her shoulders feel a little too broad and mannish, and her left leg looks outright shorter than the right.

>>3065211
her chest is twisted towards you in an unnatural way

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>>3064957
I found the face reference you traced.

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Shamelessly posting this fucking everywhere.

The torso of the pink girl is slightly long and awkward though, but about ready to move along.

>>3065211
As the other anon said, the torso is way too wide. And im not saying she should be less fat, im saying her skeleton is stretched out.

Where can I find someone to draw Realistic porn based on someone I know?

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Does fetishized content help?

>>3064508
Thats pretty hot, can you post blog? I want to follow you.

>>3064957
You should make her lean on something with her right arm.

>>3065288
don't be so jelly anon. if you work hard maybe someday you'll be at bbc's level as well.

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Im trying to focus on getting gesture and composition right before starting to do the real linework.

Any suggestions for how to put a bit more punch into this pose before I go on? Should I do another pass at the basic pose altogether using these lines as a guide? Or just start doing the proper lines and fix the anatomy up as I go?

The problem I always have is that I feel reasonably confident that I have decent gesture in the planning lines, but as I fix up anatomy and add detail, I accidentally flatten everything and the image becomes boring. How can I avoid this?

>>3065152
Oh, yeah, this could work as well. I'm sure it would improve the overall tone of the artwork a lot.

>>3065288
>Saves in references folder.
Thanks anon.

>>3065537
Thanks for this comment, anon. I'll loosen up her posture a bit. Now I realized why it might look like she's leaning onto something.

>>3065613
This pic mostly lacks proper anatomy and construction, which results in a figure that has no weight. You should go a step back and improve your fundamentals with figure studies or, even better, drawing simpler things like furniture and interacting objects. The human figure is one of the hardest things to draw and I am afraid you aren't there yet.

>>3065618

Thanks for the advice, I'll take a step back and go over the anatomy a few more times before I try to do the real line work.

I can already see I need to elongate her ribcage and bring that arm in...

>>3065621
It's not a problem of proportions. It's a problem of perspective and lineweight.

>>3065630

I think I see what you mean... now that I consider it its not clear whether we're looking up at her or directly at her.

Thanks for the pointers, this was very helpful, I'll try and find some similarly posed references to do studies of.

>>3065621
don't be afraid to use references. I don't know if you used some. But some references for the body and the angle of the head (which is complicated) can help you a lot.

>>3065649

I am using anatomical references, but actually I'm realising they're not particularly appropriate for this pose so I'm gonna hunt for some better ones.

I did this for a request on another board, but I think I might develop it further, so any thoughts on how I might improve it/continue it? Or any blatant errors not jumping out at me?

>>3065285
Nice, what are you using to draft your perspective there?

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>>3066089
FUck forgot file, tired

>>3063892
retard

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>>3065303

I remember when this was in it's sketch face, and people told it was off, why did you color it without fixing anything?

I'm not ragging on you, but it seems like a wasted effort.

>>3066091
looks like a statue with the pupil-less eyes and grayscale. would be cool

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>>3065649
>>3065630
>>3065613

Better? Worse? Why am I still rendering this instead of doing studies? Suicide?

>>3065303

Do you have a DA or a tumblr? I think I followed you on DA back in the day, if you're the same guy then you've come a long way since then.

>>3066125
Because it was a very vague critique and after I thought I had fixed it nobody bothered. I see it now, certainly, but still.

>>3066176
Thank you! Might have, it's been a long while since I posted on DA, but here ya go https://zedarkpenguin.tumblr.com/
I've got a twitter and HF too but they're linked there.

>>3066180

Yeh I'm almost certain, catgirls in revealing near-future combat gear were very impactful on my psyche when I was 17.

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>>3065211

Thanks for the advice everyone. I now painted her adjusting her body structure. didn't mind too much with feet and hands yet tho.

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>>3066231

>>3066231

Those legs look pretty stubby.

>>3066231
holy fucking shit

>>3066231
those tits look gross and way too far apart.

>>3066231
Don't render ribs. Just don't bother. It's extra work that makes your painting look worse.

>>3066231
Those HUGE feet.
Do they go with clown shoes?

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Trying to do some futa again, been a while.

>>3067308
how did you learn anatomy?

>>3067308
Hell yeah.

>>3065303
Don't understand why people bother with finished pieces when their drawing chops are not up to snuff.

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>>3064957
Applied some corrections.

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crits appreciated. is the lighting appealing? does the bondage gear make sense?

>>3067400
her left arm looks a bit awkwardly posed to me. really nice pic overall though.

>>3067400
Woah nice give her some lower lip though mouth looks weird

>>3067433
I have to add an energy like effect like in the sketch I posted earlier. I agree it looks really weird like this.
>>3067440
It's supposed to be a lip bite. I'll try some other expressions before I finish it. I guess it doesn't read very well right now.

>>3067469
how come you changed the position of her arm (and her right hand) after that earlier sketch? the posing for both feel more natural in the earlier sketch to me.

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>>3067308

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Yo.

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Last one.

>>3067616
>>3067617
>>3067618
I'm afraid cubism isn't the best style for drawing porn.

>>3067629
Too stiff by your eyes. I see I see.

>>3064957
>>3064957
Alright bbc. Her head/face looks flat and diesnt have much depth to it.

>>3067308
Eigaka you dumbfuck those hands and feet look sloppy as shit

>>3067221
bad input, feet are too small. youre a tard.

>>3067652
someone is late to the party

>>3066174
That face is so flat it reminded me of the feels guy
nipples too tiny
you dont need to draw ribs for someone with that much body fat
right bicep too high
the neck is completely wrong
shoulders too low, clavicles too low
right sholder is too far out (look at the armpit its being stretched)

>>3067999
Stop drawing immediately and kill yourself.

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>>3068050
no, i'm determined to outlive you and continue your misery

>>3068051
If you insist on shoving garbage into people's faces you could at least make it pretty garbage. Learn to fucking draw.

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>>3063219

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>>3068059
the inks did bleed a bit in that one i'll admit

>>3068077
the ink is the least of your problems you fucking faggot
unironically loomis, fix those fuck-ugly faces

>>3068059
>>3068099
he doesn't listen to advice, it's useless to try to give critique

hasn't improved in months lol

>>3068077
WHY ARE YOU STILL NOT DRAWING FOREHEADS MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY ARE YOU NOT TRYING TO IMPROVE YOURSELF, WHY ARE YOU STILL HERE

>>3067999
microcephaly fetish?

>>3067317
>>3067317

did he learn anatomy? it looks like he relies heavily on reference.

http://eigaka.tumblr.com/

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damn son

Is it possible to draw an appealing pussy, or are genitals just grotesque in general; I've seen the doxy tut but still not getting how to draw them nicely.

>>3067675
>>3068157
> Eigaka

I'm not that guy, look on the bottom right.

>>3067874

Thanks for the detailed feedback! I did think the ribs looked weird, didn't occur to me that they just shouldn't be visible.

I'll try and resolve these issues with the final line work - probably won't be an amazing final result but it's definitely been instructive.

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>>3068193
The best looking pussies have more skin than normal.
compared to cock, vaginas are just ugly.
muslims have been raping women long enough to know that they should start circumcising women so they can look better for men to look at

or are you about the inside?

>>3068204
MOOODS

>>3068212
Is that a loli?

>>3068077
are you here to improve? honest question

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>>3068213
no its a shimakaze

>>3068204
that looks like a toddler's

>>3068223
You must be really well read to recognize her from her crotch,

>>3068196
kinda hard to tell considering you have pretty much the exact same style, even the weird ass dicks.

>>3068227
I just reverse searched it

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>>3068229
> pretty much the exact same style

I totally disagree but whatever.

>>3068229
their styles are very different. and that Eigaka guy is a much much better artist.

>>3068231
Oh, I assumed it was cropped and didn't bother,

>>3065384
Keep practicing hands amigo

>>3068240
>Keep practicing amigo
fixed that for ya

>>3068193
You can follow this 100% fool-proof guide:
Get a girl, fuck her and don't forget to check if you like the way her pussy looks.
If it looks good, draw it, if it looks bad - find a new girl.

>>3067477
I wanted to make the pose look less like she was laying or leaning down on a surface. Tho I see what you mean, especially with her left arm. Thanks.

>>3067652
I already addressed the issue. I think it looks better now in the colored version. Anons were right.

>>3068193
It's like with all other appealing stuff in porn. You have to stylize it and remove the unnecessary bits that make your art look uncanny.
Just look at porn references for vaginas that you like and try recreating them, but messing with the lineart and shading/coloring as less as possible.

>>3068304
I love the "get a girlfriend" meme. Most useless meme ever. I had a lot of experience with women and the last thing I was thinking about when having sex with them was to check the anatomy of their vaginas, lol.
You can learn that stuff from a ton of resources without needing to have real life refs. Tho you have to understand how perspective and construction works, to be able to fully understand picture references. That's for sure.

>>3068329
I was not talking about getting a gf, you autistic sperg, I told you to fuck a girl
also, did you fuck them in dark room with sheets on or something? Like, when I fuck a girl I can see all her anatomy as clear as day
Anyway, people that think that photo reference is better than life drawing don't deserve to be spoonfed

>>3068404
Nude models in a figure drawing class are more pratical.

>>3068404
nude models ain't gonna fucking spread their pussy for you
also you can't fuck them after the drawing session ends
One day I'll rent a studio just because fucking people you've just painted just doesn't feel right in a normal apartment

>>3066089
Radiant Black

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What software do you recommend for making pixel porn like pic related?

>>3068404
Keep memeing. You are very cute.

>>3068157
Can't believe anyone would think that was him.

>>3068404
>gets angry for no reason
>calls others autistic spergs
gold

>>3068460
ms paint

>>3068204
>vaginas are just ugly.

>not being able to see the instrinsic beauty in the shape of all things
>falling for the "my brain tells me this is ugly" meme
Maybe one day you will get it and stop being gay

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Again, does anyone want to trade art? I'm willing to trade gifs for single pictures.

>>3067308
i cant believe you wont do nothing with this. fuck you.

>>3068736
I like this, although sometimes your style seems off, this lioks good in that department. I love the titties, but with them and the overall animation, I think the constant rate of frames makes it look stiff. Some proper easing of spacing and weight could improve this.

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>>3069138

>>3068745
>i cant believe you wont do nothing with this.

Who said that? It's the opposite if anything, wanted to do a comic/doujin with that setting.

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>>3069214
I always thought this was off; the reference was uniform but I think it might be that Yuri is moving 20 ms slower or that she pops up and down more.

>>3068460
Graphicsgale is pretty good

>>3069138
dwarf arm
broken neck
butthole way too high up

dude go back to the beginners thread, get this garbage out of here

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>>3067874

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First time posting outside of the beginner thread. Wanted to post undersketch before I start inking. Is she looking alright?

>>3069645

Body is constructed pretty good but the head needs to be like twice the size it currently is.

I would take another pass at the arms too, they're both too long and the positioning feels contrived - find a better reference, and/or experiment with their placement.

I would also maybe rotate the whole thing to put the tits nearer to the centre of the composition, and incorporate a slightly sharper bend in her midriff at the same time to bring out the S curve of the body.

How do I study fucking poses? Do I just find a video of people doing it then pause and study or is there some better way of doing it

>>3069662
Many options you can choose from.
1. look up nude photos Analyze them in the way the gesture works. how every thing wraps around another.
2. Go out in real life, get friends or people ( if you're willing) to help you study their bodies and proportions Or even use your own body. (this one is quite beneficial but slower. Because you can actually have a 3D like an object seeing all of its contours and how everything goes into the depth of field. and How truly light affects the splotches at which the light hits. Though this can be very frustrating too.

3. You can invest in mannequins and model dolls and so that the object can stay relatively still so you can better understand what is really going on in the picture. ( I do this a lot) Have bought quite a few mannequin and dolls to help me get an idea of how things wrap. The directional point at which the body tilts and such.

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>>3069645
Just played a bit with your pic.

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>>3069642
My tips aren't perfect i know

>>3069704

Thanks so much, this is really instructive. I think I addressed some of these issues already but the face and boobs advice will be particularly helpful going forward, really appreciate it.

>>3064957
Perfect.

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>>3069652
Started fixing it and then painted over the sketch

>>3069685
Aww she looks cute, I like what you did with her face and the lighting.

>>3069753

Much better!

>>3069295
If you look at the moments were her arms are up there's a cool down period were her arm and hands stay nearly the same and then she pulls back and repeat. Your attempt lacks that easing and every frame constant ib motion. It makes yours look weightless while Yuri has proper kinetic energy here.

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>>3069799
The arm holds on 2 and 3 and 5 and 6 are there, I basically went pose to pose with Yuri when I drew it. Don't know why it looks funny, I wound up scrapping this animation and making a new one based off of Blue Mary but it was worse.

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>>3069753
the way her neck connects to her clavicles is incorrect, tried to do a quick redline
also there's a lot of foreshortening issues but I'm too sleepy to t hing about them
digging the emotion tho, keep it up

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Character concept I did.

>>3070193
>polishing turds
grats

>>3069918
I think it has something to do with the timing then, I'm currently working on a project atm like this to see something myself but I'm at work so I'll have to post it later if get the chance. But even my example looks like it doesn't have that effect on the Yuri gif, even though both have the same number of frames.

Also one more thing, i noticed upon studying your pic, you have the girls leg (her left) on the wrong side on the 5th and 6th frames, it needs to be the other leg. And if you don't mind, got any place where i can see the style of work you do? Your female figures are like how i like tp draw them.

>>3070569
Nice "critique"

>>3070686
well, you didn't try hard to make a good drawing, so why should he try and explain stuff for you?

>>3070620
Sorry man, I don't post anywhere, thanks for bringing the leg to my attention though, I would have never noticed that.

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>>3065618
So following your advice, kinda like where this is going now. Sells the whole show a bit more. I am not going to put my focus on foreground characters. I know a bit of an artistic faux pas but I know my subject matter...

>>3071222
Ah, I'll try and plus that aspect then. Thanks.

>>3071070
You could cut off a bit of the bottom, the viewers take up a lot of space.
Also focus on the task man, you draw a realistic elephant and tiger but the women look fucking derpy.

>>3071225
derpy how by the way? Their faces?

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Drawing this, something bothers me about it, not sure what.

Where can I find an artist who's willing to draw porn of real people and make it look real?

>>3065384

no

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>>3070979
Bummer. Well, at least I'll look forward to whenever you post your work and stuff. Also I think it's just an illusion, I noticed in the sprite example the girl's right hand is placed where her left hand is a frame before it so it looks like that was causing that effect to me. So it's no big deal, my bad. Keep up the good work.

>>3071246
I think you should be able to see more of the underside of the dick's head since the angle is from below.

Liking it a lot though.

>>3071349
Nice golden girl, did you make the titfucking animation from the last GG thread?

>>3071379
No, that was another anon. But shit I just realized I forgot to resize the image, sorry other anons...

Thanks though, glad you like it. Just doing this for fun to experiment really, I hope to work on this a bit more later.

>>3071294
>>3071294
>>3071294
Bump.

>>3071246
I'm just rambling here but it might be because a lot of the drawing is dedicated to that midriff and underboob, but all the action is supposedly around the cocks squishing fubuki's face and her reaction.
The drawing is nice don't get me wrong, but the composition doesn't support the concept? If that makes sense.

>>3071246
her mouth is not filled with one of those cocks

also they are too veiny when compared with the amount of details on the rest of the piece, maybe rendering will resolve that if you make them less obvious

I would keep one big vein and make the others smaller, as in no black lines to define their edge, just make one line of color, blue or red, some veins are blue some are red

>>3071540
>>3071644
Went to sleep and looking at it again and it's definitely Fubuki's body that bothers me. Head and boobs seems fine but rest looks off. Cutting some of it is possible, but that would changethe image ratio wouldn't it?

Beginning to regret to not have made a simpler frontal shot, not satisfied by the composition.

>>3071246
Badly constructed hands, symbol drawn eyes with no depth, anty-gravity boobs. There's other stuff too, but those are the most glaring mistakes.

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>>3071246
Alright, think it already works better like that for the body, moved down the nipples a bit too and changed the left arm, still need to think of a pose for the hand.

>>3071761
> symbol drawn eyes with no depth

I disagree, but how about you show me by redrawing them?

As for the hand, they're still rough for now because it's a sketch.

>>3071793
stop posting here if you never accept any critique. your art isn't on the level where you'd get praised for it.

>>3071294
Why would you want porn to look as real as someone? Why not just look at real porn

>>3071858
>stop posting here if you never accept any critique

Do I need to praise everything you say (if you even said anything) and kiss you dick to be considered as "accepting critiques"? One of the anons talked about the boobs having no gravity and I did fix that by lowering the nipples, and I answered to the hands parts by saying it's still the sketch, I'll improve them for the clean.

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>>3071793

>>3071865
Didn't expect you do actually do it, you're not really making me learn anything you know, I know how eyes works. Eyes I did are rough and were gonna be redrawn more properly, particularly the eyelashes.

But even then your eyes are realistic ones that have parts that lacks appeal, I don't/won't draw the caruncles for example. Don't go thinking stylized/simplified always mean it's symbol drawing, and don't go expecting perfection in sketches.

>>3071873
I told you what's wrong with the perspective of your eyes and why that's symbol drawing. Now, take it or leave it, champ.

>>3071858
This anon is totally right.

>>3071888
>and why that's symbol drawing

And explained why it's not and that I already know about what you put in your redline.

>>3071896
Not them but making excuses. You do it right the first time, simple as that. That level of "sketchwork" is far too detailed to just draw over it again, it's a waste of fucking time. His redline is exactly what I should have saw from your drawing at this state and you bullshitting your lack of skill ain't fixing shit. Stop this shit, do it competently or stop posting.

>>3071920
>That level of "sketchwork" is far too detailed to just draw over it again

No it's not? I'm telling you it's a sketch, albeit not a rough one, and then you complain about it not being a finished lineart? What kind of nonsense are you saying?

>>3071873
>>3071896
>>3071924

Excuses.

>>3071933
Whatever makes you sleep well at night dude.

>>3071935
and we end up with butthurt.

tipical TGS dunning kruger behavior.

>>3064957
It's a good drawing but damn, that thing anime artists do when they hide the bottom plane of the neck is cringy as fuck. It's the advanced equivalent of hiding your character's hands behind their back in every pose.

>>3065303
Anon, don't you dare use this instead of the >>3066125 version. If you're not willing to put extra effort or take a few steps back to fix your mistakes, you might as well put down the pencil for good.

>>3068193
>>3068204
Just think about an orchid flower, full of Gods' nectar. Or maybe a secret sanctuary, something that has inspired male artists for thousands of years.

Read Mattesi's Force. It's all about the mindset, the idea and emotion you have about your subject will imprint itself into the drawing one way or another.

>>3071873
It only counts as a stylistic choice if you know how to draw proper eyes in the first place.
This >>3064957 is a good ref for your eyes. Compare the two, one is a stylistic choice, one is symbol drawing.

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>>3071793
More progress.

>>3072488
Those dicks are pretty fucking gross dude, and this is coming from somebody who likes dicks.

>>3072494
>and this is coming from somebody who likes dicks.

Seems like you don't really like them then.

>>3072500
I came here to post this

>>3072500
>>3072515
Some people prefer their futa dicks smooth and supple.
Some people like theirs with balls. Some without.
Some people like theirs throbbing with lots of veins. Some like theirs with only a small few veins.
Some people like me like their futa dicks to come in all shapes and sizes. Like elephant or dog.

>>3072522
You're right. But you should rather tell that to >>3072494 who seems to think only his taste in dicks matters.

>>3072522
So simply put, you're not a faggot. Fuck off.

>>3072488
Are you taking commissions? Contact info?

>>3071873
What the fuck is the point of asking for a critique of a picture that isnt finished? He took time out of his day to help and you tell him his effort was wasted because you were lazy. Finish the picture to the best of your ability and then get criticism, you cunt.

>>3072605
I clearly said in my first post >>3071246 it was in progress, was bothered by something so asked if someone had an idea, and that ended up being Fubuki's body posture I tweaked.

The filenames have "wip" in it, isn't that enough to tell it was unfinished anyway?

>>3072612
it's not about what you said in your first post. is about what you said in this post >>3071873
you come across as an ungrateful asshole.

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First oc ;> Ik its shit but its my shit

do you guys watch any porn artists streams?
ive really been getting to a few lately, its pretty fun and nice to watch their processes

>>3072876
No and you should stop that unless you want to learn their bad habits.

>>3072612
I dont give a fuck if you said its a work in progress or not, dont post works in progress. Post a picture that you deem finished and then ask for critique. We dont know what you still have left to work on, he made a good comment and put in effort to help and you act like a child.

>>3072488
Since you won't take criticism and you're only posting wips, why not make a blog and post it here/the promotion thread?

>>3072488
Her head isn't in the same perspective as the rest of her body.

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From a Nier Automata genderbender thingy I was working on Krita untill last month.
Now trying on re doing it all on CSP instead. (only made two pages so far in krita luckly)

since I have niche fetishes, I've been thinking about biting the bullet and drawing my own porn. Problem is, I've heard plenty of artists who say they're unable to fap to their own work.
What do you guys say?

>>3072865
thats the spirit

>>3071726
no, just stop

>>3070193

last time i checked, clothes didnt have fucking insane bright highlights

also why is there a cup? completely steals the image

>>3073328
My moneys on it being there for piss or pussy juice.

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Hope am not too late. here's my artwork. this cant be porn per say. but its got boobs

>>3073299
given how stupid your question is, I'd say you are a dickbrain. dickbrain artists don't have any problems with fapping to their own art. go for it.

>>3073378
make boobs bigger

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Even if there's still problems here I'm done with her for now.

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>>3073667

>>3068460
piskel is alright

>>3072488
Those tits are off mang

>>3063682
I think you're getting a little bit ahead of yourself. Try to improve your grasp of the basics, like gesture drawing and proportions.

>>3069239
The head and the neck are super off I would look up a reference or even take a look of yourself looking back in the mirror. The balls also look too far back as the taint is usually a bit longer. Also the balls are a bit small as well.

I like the toy in the front but it would be nice if you fixed the perspective of the bases for both of them to really give it the emphasis that one is in the foreground and the other is in the background.

>>3073667
>>3073669
Dude how the fuck do you paint? I want to actually paint like this but all I've ever done is anime based shit so my digital art ends up the same way

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An attempt at drawing a girl with smaller breast.

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Does this count?

>>3074410
Something about your lines is disgusting, they look really dirty and nasty.
How are you scanning them in?
And what program do you use to colour in?

>>3074550
I use gimp to color things, all I do when I scan is adjust the brightness and contrast until no pencil lines are visible, sometimes I have to make the lines darker by adjusting the levels in gimp.

>>3074557
Do you use a multiply layer for the lineart and colour under it?
Are you satisfied with your lines?

>>3074562
No layers I just flood fill then select the color and shade it. I never gave much thought to line quality, a friend keeps telling me to use a tablet. I'm mainly concerned about being able to draw girls faces correctly.

>>3074576
No wonder it looks so fucked up, please do try to use layers; and don't hike up the contrast so high. The dirty look makes the drawings so much less appealing.
Can you post an unedited scanned drawing so I can show you what i mean?

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>>3074687
Here's one.

>>3063259
Wut happened to your h-f page? You had good stuff, especially those animated gifs

>>3075119
Aw, there were only like 4 pictures on it.

>>3075125
Still, why'd you take it down?

Also, I tried contacting you via skype to no avail. You said you'd be down to commission some animation (remember me?). Instead of art trades, how's about $?

>>3075152
Use [email protected]

>>3067308
We can post loli stuff here?

>>3075286
Tatsumaki isn't a loli.

>>3075289
she looks like a child. and any "2000 year old dragon arguments" are invalid.

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>>3063219
in a art block so I draw big butts

>>3075341
She's 28 actually.

>>3075341
Children doesn't have hips and thighs like that. It's a petite/midget.

>>3075402
>>3075466
pedo excuses

>>3075587
You should go outside more weeb, you wished children looked like that.

>>3075693
literally what?

>>3075587
>>>/reddit/

>>3064957
>>3065069
The hair implies that she's floating, but if I just look at her feet, then I kinda' get the same problem that >>3064993 's observing.

>>3076663
Gross. Learn how to loomis before you come up with this crap

>>3076663
you lack, knowledge, appeal and skill.

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>>3072488
>>3067308
Hmm tats with big futa balls
>>3075466
>>3075341
Tats isn't usually that smol but ye kid don't that anatomy.
>>3075587
Reason why I hate smol characters can't lewd them without being called pedo and I don't want to change the characters appearance too much. Also it's illegal where I live.

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>>3067400
Hey bbc, great pic, do you have any usefull tips on doing character illustrations like this from your experience. Thx in advanced.

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my attempt at ss

>make porn image
>takes 2-3 days usually
>fap my brain out in process
>lose interest
>never finish the image
>never revisit it again
How do you guys deal with this shit?

>>3076994
post.your.work.

>>3077044
post your work

>>3066231
The way the ribs are painted look like layers of loose sagging skin. Paint them more subtle, and don't make them curve up towards the breasts, rib cages go downwards diagonally. Drawing was good tho. Do more work from life.

>>3067433
Not convinced by the vertical straps. I see where you're going with it but cannot see them working like that in real life. Looks good otherwise

>>3067400
Very nice, shame about the NASA background though, you made your artwork look 15% more noobish. The lip bite works better from a front on view of the face because you'll want to show one side of the bottom lip while the other side is being bitten. I hope it makes sense.

What ever happened to Kyle?

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Well why not keep at it, next piece. Anyone care to point out any glaring anatomical flaws? I'm a little more confident in the general structure of the girl this time.

>>3075752
its almost funny how much reddit hates anything anime related

>>3077065
>>3077065
>Not convinced by the vertical straps. I see where you're going with it but cannot see them working like that in real life.

yeah, i was unsure about those as well. nice to get confirmation that it needs work. thanks for the crit!

I SUMMON KYLE TO THIS THREAD

>>3076994
1. Stop being a dickbrain
2. Stop drawing porn if you can't even finish work per day at maximum.

Plain and simple.

>>3077259
Fuck off feetfaggot.

>>3075286
Not this guy, but serious question?

Can we post loli/furry, and other unchristian subjects on this thread if we're looking for critique? Or do the autists get too triggered?

>>3077390
If I'm not mistaken I posted bestiality, and I've seen another thread post toddler with little ramification. Just make sure the state or country you're in doesn't outlaw it in any form like texas.

not a single sexy pic in here, it's like aliens trying to understand human sexuality

>>3077675
unappealing

>>3074494
Next draw vita in a wet t-shirt.