Critique/Advice (Warning: Weird)

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i added a more grainy filter based on the persons skin, its less blended in terms of color but it doesn't pop as much

kindly fuck off

>>3063227
thanks, but honestly this isnt my favorite thing to do. I'm being hired for this. i like it as much as you do.

The shadows are missing, it looks like its floating in mid air. The position the girl is in makes it so the scrotum should be resting on her thighs but the shadows dont match and there is no shadow for the penis itself, however small or less visible it may be. Also the connection between her pelvis area and the shaft shoul be more grainy or darker.

The perspective of the first dick is way off.

>>3063258
they're both off

in the first one it appears to be angled about 15-20 degrees to the right (from her perspective) from what it should be. the base also seems to be a bit higher than it should be. at this pose the balls should be squashed between the thighs pretty much, instead of just weirdly floating in front of them

in the second one it's about 5-10 degrees to the left from what it should be, and again it's too high, the dick isn't connected to the lower stomach but to about where her clitoris should be

>>3063206
go to >>>gd

>>3063231
Then you shouldn't take something that you can't do...