My first animation short

>>3049240
I liked it until they starTed fighting, not sure why you paused the music just for an explosion sound effect

No constructive critique because I don't animate

>>3049240
It looks like a weird animation you would find on Adult Swim at 2 in the morning after waking up because you got thirsty.

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This actually made me laugh at how bad it was. I couldn't even tell what the fuck was happening for about the 1st half of the video, and the animation quality varies from being actually decent to being hilariously stiff and robotic. Not to mention the meme worthy sound effects that interrupted the dope music. Honestly, if you'd gotten rid of all of the sound effects and just put the full song or even just looped whatever music clip you had of that song it would've made the whole thing 10 times better and not as laughably cringy. I was gettin into the groove until 0:56 where it kinda just kneejerks you outta the experience. Overall decent for a first animation but this is just super amatuerish dude, practice your timing and spacing of your animations and ADD MORE frames. If you also learn and imitate the shot compositon of good anime or movies you could probably become a pro in a year dude, you clearly got the passion for it.

>>3049400
Thanks for the full and interesting review!

>>3049240
what the other guy said

>>3049671
Who do you mean?

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Also here is some gifs from the cut.

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you really need to work on making things as clear as possible immediately
like this for example right in the beginning, you see waves moving on top of this star-shaped thing and hear waves but apparently it's supposed to be a ship floating in the sky based on the next clip
it should be clear right away in the first clip that it's a ship in the sky, not some starfish washed up on a beach
the whole thing is filled with these types of clarity issues and it makes the entire thing unnecessarily confusing
to you it might not seem confusing because you're the one who came up with the idea but you need to be constantly thinking about what someone watching it for the first time would think

>>3049758
That is the point. One of many issues i will work on. Thanks for the review!