I can see what's wrong with it but I don't have the technical knowledge on how to fix it.
Mostly chin up perspectives and side-angle views are my hardships.
Here's something 'better' I tried to do.
I also can't seem to do any eye forms from different perspectives. :/
>>3041451
Use this
https://sketchfab.com/models/3557df58184c4755b329120e4d2ff112
Move it around and try the perspectives that are hard for you
>>3041463
Thank you! Is there anything on male shoulders and hips?
>>3041466
https://sketchfab.com/graft/collections/anatomia
Checks those, maybe you'll find a nice one to work with