Critics thread

i like the warped perspective, but needs more edge control. are you using 3 pass method? like https://citizensketcher.com/paintings/
try again or make another pass also your painting will never be better than the drawing so be sure you work on that as well.

>>3038662
I like it, but the colors get a little muddy. try maybe using some more vivid colors or maybe just make sure to fill the big open areas, so they dont draw too much attention to the eyes.

>>3038662

I like it very much, but I aree about the edge control, though I get it that it is hard to achieve on the move in public transportation.

>citizensketcher

Good site, his book is also nice.

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The skin colors need to look muddier, otherwise it's not realistic.

>>3038783
Yes, needs more Muslims.

>>3038662
how did you do this? did you bust out your water and everything right there?