Help it looks so bad!

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>>3037946

I find it okay, what bugs you with it?

>>3037946
Who is Avril?

>>3038004
Lol thanks. I find that it doesn't have enough depth and it doesn`t seem to really have any interesting motion going on with the shapes... The artist is edouard henri avril

>>3037946
nah it looks good.

>>3038004
terrible. this edit takes away all the atmosphere.

>>3037946
Add some darks/lights to the town.

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it looks pretty good to me, the left side looks a bit empty, though i suppose thats what deserts are
>>3038004
i would tone it more like this

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>>3038013

It reminds me of Ilya Repin (right of pic).

>>3038050

Yes, yours is obviously better. I overdid it.

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>>3038085
>ly better. I overdid i
Lol crap dude I found the painting on pinterest and put it into google images and it said it was Eduard Henri Avril. Damn lol. I tihnk I'm gonna stash this one for a bit all your critiques were superhelpful but I think the real problem is at the core of the idea I might just completely re-do this one.

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