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Any critiques on this sketch

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Trying out some Marko Djurdjevic/Matt Rhodes style stuff.
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>>3036699
WE WUZ ROMANZ N' SHIT
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>>3036699
Lines are scratchy and don't help show form all that well.
The metal doesn't provide enough context of the environment (even though he's in white space) and is rendered way more than anything else, giving an "off" feel.
I like the powerful pose, but i think having the sword angled downwards slightly would help create a sense of a "imposing triangle" composition.

If it's a study/artist copy then whatever.
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No it's just a daily sketch I'm gonna try to post one on here every day. I agree with everything you said. Corrected the stuff a bit.
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Can you faggots stop making new threads for critique and post in the fucking generals?

oh and by the way, learn anatomy by looking at real people not comic books
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>>3037413 lol jealous m8?
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