Dumb Hair Thing

>>3028058
that looks like shit, and not just the hair

>>3028076
Can you explain why please?

>>3028291
im not that anon, im not even an /ic/ regular in fact i come from /co/ where this stuff is acceptable

dude there is no style to this, no lineweight, no from, the colors you picked don't work together you didn't even pic the right color to shade and the weirdest part is that even with those super thick outhlines the linework doesn't look smooth at all

the only way you could make me accept this is if maybe you post a full body pic of that characters and it turns out it actually had a body that follows the most basic anatomy rules

that way i could at least justify it as a very weird style

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Oh yeah almost forgot to answer your question

go by the mickey mouse/ astoboy rule

just keep the ponytail in the same position regardless of where she is facing

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>>3028495
So I tried to fix the shading. I change her design a bit but not much (this pic is her old design). Last is that I think I was trying to find ways to fit primary colors in but it did not come out well. Sorry for all this text but thank you for your help anon!